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Revenge Chapter 3: FINISHED!!!!

Sep 08, 2009 20:58

Title: Revenge, Chapter 3
Author: vinniebatman a.k.a. batmanvinnie a.k.a. Alice a.k.a. well, me
Rating: Mature because of sexy male slashy fun times. So if you don’t like M/M smut, you’ve been warned!
Pairing: Spike/Xander (mmm… Spander)
Summary: Spike decides to get his revenge and plans. Which we know never goes well..
Disclaimer: I hired ( Read more... )

btvs, fanfic, spander, my writing

Comments 10

bmblbee September 9 2009, 10:53:59 UTC

Oh, yes! *sigh* Such lovely porn. I'm not sure I remember this story but I remember your name and this chapter was wonderful early in the morning with a cup of coffee. Thanks.

vinniebatman September 9 2009, 13:44:12 UTC

Thank you! Someone mentioned a link to previous chapters might be helpful, so that's there now, as well.

Thank you so much for the feedback!

And the good idea!

*goes to get coffee*

~Alice~

mulder200 September 9 2009, 11:50:46 UTC

Well, like the saying goes, better late than never! I love that the boys are finally on the same page now.

vinniebatman September 9 2009, 13:45:36 UTC

And the nakedness is important too!

Sorry, I was very concerned with including the porn.

I'm glad you liked it and thank you so much for leaving a comment.

~Alice~

ellia September 9 2009, 12:26:59 UTC

Lovely story, i love Spike's reactions, and the image at the end of them all snuggled up is so cute.

vinniebatman September 9 2009, 13:47:17 UTC

Yeah, snuggling is the best ending to porn and fanfic. It should be a rule.

Thank you so much for the feedback on this!

~Alice~

_beetle_ September 29 2009, 06:24:00 UTC

Well, I, for one don't forgive you for being peer-pressured into other fics. You're gonna have to work to regain my trust.

Xander's brain screamed "wrongwrongwrong!", but his body felt right, connected.

"Oh my God!"

Spike and Xander separated with a start at the high-pitched shriek. They turned towards the door and faced a horrified Slayer. "My eye brains!"

ZOMFGBBQGQBAMF!!!!

That has to be one of the funniest things I've ever read. Thank you so, so much for that. Tears rolling down my face. I dunno how I'm even gonna finish this.

Okay, coherence later, right now I'm still giggling. But I will say that more wouldn't go amiss. Like a five years down the road, fic.

"Eye brains" :D

vinniebatman September 29 2009, 16:15:17 UTC

Well, I, for one don't forgive you for being peer-pressured into other fics. You're gonna have to work to regain my trust.

*weeps*

I'm sorry! Please forgive me! I sent the last part of Botched Spell to a beta yesterday (since I sent you the CM fic and the other beta essentially called betaing all of my Spander stuff), so that will be finished soon.

*sniffles*

Please don't hate me.

But I'm glad you liked the "eye brains" bit, because for some reason, I wrote like three fics where Buffy walks in on them. I had to get creative and I didn't want to keep on using the term "brain soap!"

I'm glad you liked this, though at this stage, given the other 20 WIPs, I'm not going to do a second part to this. At least not yet.

~Alice~

Wonderful story wrtr_aka_wmgrg October 7 2009, 15:55:19 UTC

I'm so glad you're taking the time to finish some stories ... you have a wonderful talent, and it's a shame to see good stories languish.

Re: Wonderful story vinniebatman October 7 2009, 15:58:45 UTC

Wow, so flattering.

*preens*

Yeah, I just think part of it is that I'm a secretary so I spend all day on the computer, and sometimes the last thing I want to do is write. But I'm pushing myself to finish, and comments like yours make me feel happy and driven to continue.

Thanks.

~Alice~