Leigh!fic- La Prophétie (1/1)- Cedric Diggory/Fleur Delacour

[venividiscribi]

Title: La Prophétie (1/1)
Author: Leigh, aka leigh_adams
Characters: Cedric Diggory/Fleur Delacour
Rating: PG
Word Count: 3,743
Summary: The summer she turned seventeen, Fleur Delacour heard her first prophecy. Little did she know how it would change her life forever.
Author’s Notes: So, this turned out a lot longer than I expected. I just started writing, and

Comments

[elle_blessing]

I really, really liked this. It's definitely refreshing to have a different character's take on events we know very well. You know you have Fleur's voice down. I will admit that ... yeah, I don't speak French. I have no idea what was said in the beginning, what the prophesy was, and it only kind of made sense at the end there. I guess that's what you're going for?

Anyways, great job, Leigh! This was a great piece.

[leigh_adams]

Is the hover translation not working for anyone else? I used the HTML that's supposed to show the English translation if you hover your cursor over the French!

*headdesk*

[elle_blessing]

Ahhh.. it worked. Never fear. I just didn't even think to do that. Maybe make a note somewhere up top?

[venividiscribi]

Taken care of. :*

[bendleshnitz1]

Oh, I'm silly. I'm sad even when I knew how it would end. We know Cedric dies...still, I'm so sorry for Fleur.
I love their first kiss. It was so romantic and well described!
Wonderful fic, Leigh!

[pyrobear]

But she cannot get that handsome, rugged redhead out of her mind, oui?

Good job, Leigh. We know Cedric's going to die, but we (not counting Bill) don't actually want to see it actually happen. We want them to be happy. Then again, does this generation ever truly obtain happiness?

[elle_blessing]

*giggles*

*is Bill/Fleur fan/waves pom poms*

[leigh_adams]

Hey hey, I is also a Bill/Fleur fan! It was just fun to...experiment a bit.

*grins*

[raspberry_rave]

Zomg, I love this! *glomps*

Fleur's mind is ~amazing~ This makes me want to write sister!fic, I swear. [after exams, I promise :"] Your characterizations were so on it really kept my attention (and that's saying something because I've been multi-tasking ALL NIGHT) and the plot was like whoa~ Even though we know how it ends, the journey there? Totally and fantastically novel. :D

[fiery_flamingo]

D: CEDRIC! FLEUR! *sobs*

I really enjoyed this alternate look at these events. Your Fleur is fierce and I'm glad to see her out and about again, even considering the circumstances.