Gifts part 3: Reflection

[velvet_mace]

UGH it's done, but it's sooo rough.

TITLE: REFLECTION (Gifts Part 3)
PAIRING: Roy!Greed x Roy, Roy x Ed
RATING: PG
WARNING: No sex, some mild violence, but nothing hard core. Angst. Plot!

Comments

[devils_devotion]

..................Your ending is so totally not an ending. *emo* I want more. A plot is building. Envy is being snarkish. WORLDS ARE BEING UPENDED BIT BY BIT.

*flail* I think I'm just sad to see a good thing come to an end. :( Woe is me.

[velvet_mace]

Sigh... but there was no sex...

I just couldn't see Roy wanting sex, so this came out strangely gen. Ah well, that's "happy" endings for you.

[devils_devotion]

Oh dude, I think that BECAUSE of all the trauma he's been through, Roy would probably...I don't know, never have sex again. Ever. ^^;;

[velvet_mace]

Well, cirtainly not with a man, but I imagine he'll be stlowly back to dating and even sleeping with his dates eventually. He's a tough man.

[lil_missb]

Aw...I'm sad to see this story go. It was so good. I really liked the ending, even though there was no sex. I really liked how Ed rescued Roy. You don't see that too often.

[velvet_mace]

Yep, it's my attempt at a hollywood ending. Damn it's been a while since I wrote GEN!

[marith]

wargh! Believable ending, but...I can't believe that's all there is to it. Ed and Al both have issues to work through, no matter how adamantine they are, and there were TOO Roy/Ed hints in part 2 when I went back and checked to make sure I wasn't imagining them :)

Thank you for making it a happy ending, though. *relieved*

[velvet_mace]

Yes, there were hints, but I honestly couldn't see Roy wanting sex with ANYONE after what he'd been through. As for Ed... that was kind of the wrong foot for him, too.

Checks with Roy!Muse: You horny?
Roy: Fuck you, Velvet.
Me: How about you, Ed.
Ed: Leave me alone, I'm busy cleaning up this mess you left me.

[marith]

*snk* It's true, both of them would quite reasonably want a good long break. Although I do like what mikkeneko and tavella are doing.

[sky_dark]

YAY! It was a GREAT ENDING! Perfect! Believeablely manga-cannonish in my book! WOW, you wrote them really IC! I'M SO HAPPY I'M BOUNCING IN MY DESK CHAIR! =D

[velvet_mace]

Oooh! Thank you! I wiggle with glee! As soon as I get these kids to sleep, I'm so on AIM, you going to be around tonight?

[sky_dark]

OMG yes, I'm so having velvet withdrawals. I've been making Ling icons =/ I can't stop..whaddya think?

[chrstphrl]

I am always in awe of your storytelling. This is great and so not really and ending. Roy won't be himself for some time. Hmmm.

[velvet_mace]

Sadly, (and realistically), no. I screwed him over pretty badly. He's going to need a lot of therapy before the newspaper comes off his mirrors. However, he's started up the path to healing.