Prison Break Fic: Hope (1/1)

[veiled_shadow]

Title: Hope (1/1)
Author: veiled_shadow
Fandom: Prison Break
Rating: PG
Genre: Angst, fluff, romance
Pairing: Michael/Sara, other
Spoilers: Season Four [but slightly AU]
Disclaimer: All characters and situations from Prison Break are properties of Paul Scheuring, Adelstein-Parouse Productions, Hofflund/Polone and Original Television in association

Comments

[torogi]

Wow, your writing is just beautiful. I love your spin on how Michael finds out - I thought it remained true to the characters. Sigh, I miss them already.

[veiled_shadow]

Thank you, I miss them too =[

[danni18]

Love it, so much better than the dhow. I feel like they never really touched on the emotional side of it. You wrote them so well and your dialogue was very effective

[veiled_shadow]

I know all we got was smiles and a hug, I wanted a Sara explanation so wallah *points to fic* glad you enjoyed it =]

[thyboz]

Thanks for this, I enjoyed it, it's a nice take on how things could have been! I especially liked the second part, I think there is a lot to explore in the aftermath of that bathroom drowning scene.

[veiled_shadow]

Thanks =]

[mllecalla]

‘I love you.’

The words ring out in the cold, empty room and her heart pangs as if it’s been snagged on barbed wire. And suddenly she realises why he’s been so distant these past few days. He thinks she wants to leave. He thinks she doesn’t love him anymore. He thinks he’s shown her he’s just like the company, threatening to torture, to kill, to drown.

She looks at him, shocked, and his blue eyes are pleading, begging as they penetrate hers in a way that almost makes her want to sob.

He thinks he’s lost her.

Oh, Michael.

Oh My...this is just THIS beautiful.

[veiled_shadow]

Thank you very much =] I'm glad you liked it!