Rebellion (Lies) (1/4)

Aug 11, 2010 14:39

Title: Rebellion (Lies) (1/4)
Characters/Pairings: Juliet; Jack, Claire, Charlotte, Daniel, implied Juliet/Jack, Charlotte/Daniel, others in later parts
Rating: PG (this part)
Summary: They'd both been doctors, before the world started to fall apart; before the human race suddenly had its own expiration date staring it in the face. Crossover with ( Read more... )

pairing: juliet/jack, pairing: daniel/charlotte, character: juliet, character: daniel, lj: luau, character: jack, character: claire, character: charlotte

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valhalla37 August 12 2010, 01:04:42 UTC
Thank you so much!

I think Lost's characters definitely lend themselves well to any sort of dystopian future set-up, and I love Children of Men, so when I saw both requests it kind of fit into place!

Thanks again for the lovely feedback!

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knopflergroupie August 11 2010, 19:33:17 UTC
I wish I had the brainpower to leave the comment this fic deserves, but I don't, so I'll just say that this is brilliant and I can't wait to read more. (I am so jealous of your ability to write Charlotte it's not even funny.)

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valhalla37 August 12 2010, 01:06:23 UTC
Wow, thank you so much!

The second part is pretty much completely written -- basically just finessing it -- and the third and fourth are already plotted and started, so I'm hoping it won't stretch out more than a couple weeks.

And aww, thank you -- Charlotte is one-half my favourite character ever (Daniel obviously the other) so I really, really appreciate that! :D

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franza August 11 2010, 19:43:16 UTC
you are so freaking awesome you know that?! this is such an unusual idea that you've executed so perfectly. Love how you right Juliet and I love Dan and Charlotte married trawling round in a jeep. just so brilliant. I didn't read the spoilers/warning bit so I totally got the Children of Men vibe before i even saw that it was intentional, you paint quite the picture XXXX

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franza August 11 2010, 19:44:38 UTC
JESUS! WRITE NOT RIGHT, silly me

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valhalla37 August 12 2010, 01:09:11 UTC
Lol! No worries. ;D

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valhalla37 August 12 2010, 01:08:37 UTC
Hahaha, thank you so much! You always leave the best feedback. ;D Like I said to someone else, when I saw the characters it just kind of occurred to me that Claire and Juliet would fit perfectly in the Children of Men world. And of course I couldn't leave Daniel and Charlotte out of it -- and there's more about them in the next next part for sure. ;P

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valhalla37 August 20 2010, 02:38:48 UTC
Heeeeee, yay! I'm so, so, so glad you like this! Phew, I'm so super relieved -- I wasn't sure if this would fit exactly what you were hoping to get for your queenly request.

And a second yay, because Charlotte is my absolute favourite character to write -- clearly Daniel is my fictional soulmate, but there's something about writing her that just flows when others don't, so I super appreciate you saying that! *hugs* And I don't know if I can even consider Dan as a character -- as a writer -- without Charlotte, now, for good or for ill, lol.

And a third (!!!), because I felt a little uncertain throwing our favourite nerdy scientist into a situation where he'd kind of have to be right in the action, and I wanted this fic to mostly be 'on the move', so I'm really pleased that worked for you!

Heee, that's totally cribbed from missy_useless -- she used it in a fic and I just loved it. So feel free to grab it again and pass it along! ;D

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elliotsmelliot August 23 2010, 14:48:48 UTC
This really engaging! I'm hooked!

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valhalla37 August 24 2010, 00:50:01 UTC
Wow, thanks so much! So glad to hear that! :D

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