smallville fic: flash forward

Jul 26, 2010 23:04

From my backlog, Drabblet continuation to Petite Morte; Forty years into the future, Chloe fools around in the Watchtower and  Davis...tries not to?

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smallville_fic, petit mort verse, watchtherating

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trains_lolipops July 29 2010, 09:08:57 UTC
Forty years, eh? Interesting context, but a great way to show as you say wonderfully put: He said he'd loved her, he had forty years to prove it, and he'd never stopped wanting her

He was biting on his lip, and she knew there was a list going on in his head.

The tiniest crook of his finger had been positive proof that even a tortured man could be a horndog when pushed right.

-These are my favourite lines, just love em. And I just figured out how to use the quote thingy :D

This was just a lovely play of cat and mouse to show that the incredible chemistry of chlavis is not something that expires, for their hearts only continue to beat krypton powered blood each and every day :)

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vagrantdream August 5 2010, 15:23:04 UTC
The forty years thing is based on the idea that Davis as kryptonian would barely age, Chloe wouldn't age because of her healing factor (ideally, and without braniac), and they'd have centuries to make little DoMes.

HEE! I love details. Glad you liked those lines.

1- There's always a list going on in Davis's head, I would've loved to see the sexier of them. Really, he just always thought about his every action, he had a plan, unlike some other characters on the show- Lois is all heart, Clark was mostly brawn. Then Chloe came along and he was mumbling proclamations of love in an alley. (also very hot)

2- Chloe just loves horn-dog Davis. She just can't help her. It brings her to awareness of her sexual power.

I think as more time goes on they get to know eachother's little quirks more. This was just a lovely play of cat and mouse to show that the incredible chemistry of chlavis is not something that expires, for their hearts only continue to beat krypton powered blood each and every day :)

*lubs*

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