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Beginnings - UNCONTROL (14/15)

Jun 08, 2011 19:31

Title - Beginnings - UNCONTROL (14/15)
Author - unwritten_ideas
Beta - write_my_dreams
Rating - eventual NC-17, this part NC-17
Word Count - 7,206 (69,000ish total)
Pairing - eventual Gackt x You
Characters - Gackt, You, Chacha, Junji, Chirolyn
Disclaimer - don’t own squat and if I did, I’d be posting this with pictures

Breakfast, The Talk and yukata.

( You should see how I say goodnight )

character : chacha, rating : nc-17, pairing : gackt x you, story : beginnings, character : gackt, character : junji, character : chirolyn, character : you

Comments 14

onixant June 10 2011, 01:37:13 UTC

yukata and sex reminded me of the anime "ikoku irokoi romantan", I liked the story and never bored. dressing room ... but I'd prefer if Gaku x Yuu sex in the kitchen. haha.
and another reason I liked the character because their positions are not tied to anyone "seme / uke". Gaku is Gaku and Yuu is Yuu, they're still the man did not have any of the characters become like women. I like their morning chatter, including meeting and farewell greetings. haha ^ ^
P.S. hmm, although not important in the story but can I ask, during the Gackt karer whether in addition to crew Gackt Job chacha other one felt suspicious about the proximity Gaku x Yuu?

unwritten_ideas June 10 2011, 16:27:56 UTC

Ohh, I hate it when male characters act like women. The Gackt and You I write are equals and switch up a lot XD

As for your P.S... maybe... that's kinda the next chapter.

saurgristiel June 10 2011, 16:03:33 UTC

*lol late XD*

*om noms* Keep writing those gorgeous sexings :b...... *drooling emote ^^*

This was a nice chapter ^^. I love how You was hung up on the thong thing XD

I'd love to read one that explores *not necessarily this* Gackt and his nightmares. I love the kinds of fics where he's believably vulnerable (nightmares or more combative father), and you have the skill to do it! ^^ Exploring this storyline's particular pair and how G finally does tell You would be interesting. And would You tell Cha? Or would Cha's omnipotence come into play? XD. Or might Cha find out the nightmares first, because You's away from home? It's obviously a very painful subject. BUT, it's just a suggestion ^_^

I look forward to the next chapter and your next stories ^^

unwritten_ideas June 10 2011, 16:30:55 UTC

How can anyone not be hung up on the thong thing? XD

I think Gackt is an amazing character because you can write him as being really cocky, strong and brave, yet still vulnerable and haunted. It is something that really interests me so I have no doubt that someday, I will do something with it. I don't know whether it will part of this story arc or something standalone.

Thank you for reading!