Beginnings - UNCONTROL (14/15)

[unwritten_ideas]

Title - Beginnings - UNCONTROL (14/15)
Author - unwritten_ideas
Beta - write_my_dreams
Rating - eventual NC-17, this part NC-17
Word Count - 7,206 (69,000ish total)
Pairing - eventual Gackt x You
Characters - Gackt, You, Chacha, Junji, Chirolyn
Disclaimer - don’t own squat and if I did, I’d be posting this with pictures

Breakfast, The Talk and yukata.

Comments

[mind_cell]

*gulp*
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That was so fantastically erotic. Kimono and sex are made for each other, i swear!
Ahem... *tears her mind's eye away from picturing the above scene over and over again* Soo.. What else did i want to say? Damn those gorgeous men, they're too distracting!! =P

It's great that You's putting that specific condition on table. Frankly, i think the only person who could make Gackt comply with such a condition is You (if they ever had a relationship in RL, that is :). That whole bit on personal life failings is so sad and true, i think...

Oh and it's such an awesome idea to include the details about that live! I read some bits here and there, it's good to finally know what happened. Though i did not quite understand exactly what had caused the initial cancellation.

Only one more left... It's really sad, but on the other hand i'll be able to read it all together afterwards which is the best way to get the complete picture and feeling of a fic.

[unwritten_ideas]

I had fun writing that sex scene, haha.

There's been so many little references throughout the fic about Gackt sleeping around that it had to be mentioned, I think. I hope he can manage that condition.

I don't remember what the official reason was, but I have my own theory and I wouldn't be surprised if it's correct.

Yes... just one more left!

[nihon_hamano]

*scratches head* the smut was hot, but for some reason that I can't put my finger on right now this chap was kind of hard to read. Argh... let me sleep on it and I'll reread tomorrow and see what the heck is up with it (or my brain = more likely option).

[unwritten_ideas]

Hmm, The Talk was supposed to be awkward and difficult so if it's just that then it did its job. I'd be interested to know if there is anything more.

[gabba_camui]

I love the personality of You, it was very brave to ask him all that~

OwO Yukatas are so...sexy, just as that scene. This line.."We taste so good together." was a killer line!
Very well done ;)

I can´t wait to read the last chapter.

[unwritten_ideas]

You is no push over. He's sweet and nice, but not weak.

Thanks for reading!

[ann456]

Oh so glad I finally found this part too!!!Thankyou FANTASTIC!!!!!!Now I don't want the series to end it's been so good!

[unwritten_ideas]

Oh, thank you! Sorry to say that the last part will be up soon...

[love_teddies]

awwww. so sweet
im pretty sure the one's who didnt go for the live is crying as they didnt get to see the thong part.
swimsuits next. yay.
but *sobs* last chap

[unwritten_ideas]

Yes, I was crying. I went to the Swimsuit Live the next day, but not this one :-(

Yes! Last part.

Thanks for reading!