Beginnings - KAGERO (13/15)

[unwritten_ideas]

Title - Beginnings - KAGERO (13/15)
Author - unwritten_ideas
Beta - write_my_dreams
Rating - eventual NC-17, this part NC-17Word Count - 5,880 (69,000ish total

Comments

[mind_cell]

*happy sigh*

That was... delicious. And warm. And caring. And unexpected. Not just the NC17-ish part but all of it. I absolutely like your balance of romantic and realistic.

Another thing i really appreciate is that you're not limiting your characters to strict top/bottom roles. I am not all that well-acquainted with gay culture but as far as i understand, the RL homosexuals switch roles pretty easily :)

Sooo we're in for another Uncontrol, hmm? Bet it will be as hot as the previous one! XDDD Bit still can't help wondering who'll be in (un)control this time ~_^

[unwritten_ideas]

I think limiting characters to strict roles is boring, kinda lazy and unrealistic. Especially in the case of Gackt and You. We all know the stories about how they fought when they first met - so why does anyone think You would back down and bow to Gackt? He appears to be quieter, sweeter and more relaxed than Gackt, but I doubt he's a push over who's just going to do whatever Gackt says.

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[mind_cell]

Oh i can rant on this for hours, too! Maybe because i like YOU so very much... I understand why people write fics where You's given this humiliatingly submissive role - kinks are things that are dying to be petted, you know ~_^ - but still...
Btw now that i think about it, Groovy's got their roles fixed pretty rigidly but the way she does it, the way her Gackt is submissive and simultaneously so erotically male - is just... expert!
One more day to go! I wonder if you're starting to have parting jitters btw ;)

[unwritten_ideas]

Oh, by strict/fixed roles I mean the stereotypical uke and seme that runs through fics in so many fandoms. There's nothing wrong with making a character fixed, as long as it's true to who they are and not just lazy characterisation via stereotyping.

[gabba_camui]

O.O *in shock...wait 5 minutes...maybe more.....ok ready*

Wow! That is so much better than a "hand-job"
~Very very creative and naughty You, just as I love him~

I love this chapter, the beginning was so touching *O* Love your fic! I don´t want it to end -.-

[unwritten_ideas]

I like being creative with sex scenes because I find them so hard to write!

Ahh, just two more parts left. Sorry!

[saurgristiel]

*fans self while giggling* HAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAWTT. You never see anything other than standard or oral in (especially G-based) fics. Not that I'm really a conniseur... You-kun, that was very sweet. And I agree with mind-cell. I love fics where either could be top/bottom, it feels more real that way and can make an amazing fic. and please, I hope you never write rimming or bum-2-mouth. I know it's fiction, but that's just icky...

You are a magnificent writer and I so wanna read the last 2 chaps RIGHTNOW! Wednesday seems so far away ^^

I love all your writing and can't wait to see what you write once your finished with this. It was a very interesting idea to write it around the tour like this d^_^b

[unwritten_ideas]

Yeah, there isn't too much variety in sex scenes sometimes although I'm reliably informed by gay friends of mine that it's not rare for gay men to actually not like anal sex that much so they do other things...

I don't have a problem with rimming in fics personally, but I don't think I've ever written it and there's none of that in the last two parts so you're safe XD

Thank you. Your comments are very sweet.

[unwritten_ideas]

I don't like reading fics where You is weak. Calm and quiet doesn't mean weak.

Oh, Chacha is fantastic. I want a Chacha.

Thank you for your comments!

[onixant]

hmmmm
so so, I think YOU so creative, I've seen pictures birthday cake he made ​​for Gackt. because Gackt does not like sweet, so he made a fruit cake. hmmm good lover.then just waiting for the next Gackt how creative, I think Gackt would make much more exciting. i think..
well,I salute you.
Gackt job Oops i mean Good job, haha

[unwritten_ideas]

Hahaha, thank you! I'm glad you're still enjoying it.