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Beginnings - MIND FOREST (6/15)

May 11, 2011 21:36

Title - Beginnings - MIND FOREST (6/15)
Author - unwritten_ideas
Beta - write_my_dreams
Rating - eventual NC-17, this part PG-13Word Count - 3,275 (69,000ish total ( Read more... )

character : chacha, rating : nc-17, pairing : gackt x you, story : beginnings, rating : pg-13, character : gackt, character : junji, character : chirolyn, character : you

Comments 20

ann456 May 11 2011, 13:08:58 UTC

OH Thankyou I've been waiting impatiently for this next chapter this story is soooo good and well written.More please as soon as possible,I really want to know what happens next LOL!!!!!!!!

unwritten_ideas May 11 2011, 15:48:41 UTC

Thank you. I'm sticking to posting at the weekend and on Wednesdays so only three days for the next part!

mind_cell May 11 2011, 14:12:00 UTC

YOU. ARE AWESOME.
This was painful to read.
Gackt is acting the way the absolute majority of people would act in his place. No vampire/wolf/Gundam Wing bullshit to prop up his pride xP
You is being honest and straightforward, and not trying to cater to Gackt's hurt ego. Oh so unexpected!! I thought he would go milder... Though Gackt is now properly angry and must start dealing with the situation differently... Maybe...I am not sure about anything with your story now LOL!
And just HOW are you gonna bring these two together when you're virtually not leaving them any chances???!!! Aw i am so worried for them now, and frankly the increasing rating sounds almost scary in this situation... *nail biting mode on*

unwritten_ideas May 11 2011, 15:52:26 UTC

I don't think even Gackt believes that vampire/wolf BS of his XD

It's been just over 10 days since Gackt confessed to You so after 10 days of Gackt acting like a really scary friend, I think even the most patient of people would have snapped! Besides, You and Gackt have known each other long enough to be able to speak their minds freely, I think.

Haha, you'll just have to wait for the weekend to see if the increased rating makes things better or worse!

for_th3_written May 11 2011, 14:58:59 UTC

Increased ratings? tenseangrysexyesplz?

Chacha is such a lovely mother.

I love the tension that you can feel in this chapter. You captured the sentiments perfectly.

unwritten_ideas May 11 2011, 15:54:19 UTC

I'm glad the tension came through. It's a tense situation for everyone, I think, and I'm really glad that was evident.

Ahhh, you'll have to wait and see what the increased rating brings XD

nihon_hamano May 12 2011, 01:27:18 UTC

*echo* Chacha, you are awesome.

And I love the tension between You and Gackt. It's sad, it's realistic and call me twisted but it makes tiny shivers run through me. Aaaa I need more...

nihon_hamano May 12 2011, 01:29:06 UTC

Wait WAIT. WEEKEND? BUT I'M WORKING FOR THE REST OF THE WEEK! *bawls*

unwritten_ideas May 12 2011, 11:24:32 UTC

I don't think it makes you twisted. I like drama and angst too.. that's why I'm writing it XD

Yeah, sorry. Weekend. Enjoy work (if you can!)

gabba_camui May 12 2011, 08:23:38 UTC

oh Chacha you are so amazing!!! XD
I feel so bad for Gacku but...You is half-right.

Anyway you know that I love this fic! thanks for sharing it *hugs and kisses*

"The rating increases in the next chapter…" orl? XD How much?

unwritten_ideas May 12 2011, 11:25:44 UTC

Chacha is amazing. I want a Chacha of my own.

Ahh, you'll have to wait and see about the rating increase XD

gabba_camui May 12 2011, 18:17:45 UTC

Yeah I need a friend like Cha *0*

Ok ok I´ll wait >_