Beginnings - DYBBUK (1/15)

Apr 23, 2011 22:56

Title - Beginnings - DYBBUK (1/15)
Author - unwritten_ideas
Beta - write_my_dreams
Rating - eventual NC-17, this part PG-13
Word Count - 1,801 (69,000ish total)
Pairing - eventual Gackt x You
Characters - Gackt, You, Chacha, Junji, Chirolyn
Disclaimer - don’t own squat and if I did, I’d be posting this with pictures
Summary - Gackt and You are more than friends, closer than ( Read more... )

character : chacha, rating : nc-17, pairing : gackt x you, story : beginnings, rating : pg-13, character : gackt, character : junji, character : chirolyn, character : you

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mind_cell April 23 2011, 18:30:35 UTC
OH YEESSSSS!!!
Finally!
And i am loving it! Seriously. I was wondering if your story would be a "beginning-of-relationship" one or a "middle-of-relationship" one, but i am so glad you decided to go all the way and show it all from the start, so to say. That is, if i understood your summary correctly and as of the beginning of the tour their love was still of a rather platonic and brotherly nature XP
Update soon! How about once a week? ;)
Btw pleasant layout!

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unwritten_ideas April 24 2011, 16:18:45 UTC
It's platonic but flirty. The next part helps establish the relationship more and then it starts kicking off in Part 3 XD

I'm thinking once or twice a week for the updates. It depends on how I feel!

Thanks for the comment. I know you've been waiting for it, I just hope it's good enough to justify the wait!

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mind_cell April 24 2011, 18:19:23 UTC
I somehow am quite sure the wait will be justified. Seriously, you'd have to totally mess up the plot to make me go "Bleh" ;) I don't think you're capable of messing up characters though. At least, i hope so ^^

I am all for "twice a week". Now that i am finally capable of reading published books again - which i was practically incapable of for several years due to stress and a number of other factors - i have begun to look differently at fanfiction and take in more nuances and developments. So, pls DO feel like posting more often!

Oh, and do not forget the challenge assassin!Gackt fic!

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unwritten_ideas April 25 2011, 15:19:01 UTC
I do hope so *gets worried* I hope it's in character (well, as much as fiction can be at any rate!) and that they remain consistent throughout... the beta reading went quite smoothly so I should take that as a positive sign!

I think I will do twice a week. Probably weekends and Wednesday. Seems a nice pace... If I do one a week it'll take four months nearly.

Oh, I have part 2 and 3 of the challenge fic finished and part 4 completely planned out. I'm going to wait on that for awhile though.

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gabba_camui April 24 2011, 04:02:37 UTC
yessssss finally you post it!!!! *-*
This is very very interesting. I´ll wait for the next chapters~

Everything sounds so...natural. And...we have to love Chacha! XD
Nice work!

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unwritten_ideas April 24 2011, 16:19:38 UTC
I love Chacha so much. He's always so much fun to write.

Thank you for saying it sounded "natural". I hope it remains that way!

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nihon_hamano April 24 2011, 10:07:58 UTC
Totally looking forward to the rest of this. Nice job b._.d

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unwritten_ideas April 24 2011, 16:19:53 UTC
Thank you. I hope you enjoy the rest!

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nihon_hamano April 24 2011, 20:25:02 UTC
I know I will. I had to come back and reread Chacha's parts in this before I need to go off again ^^;;;;;

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love_teddies April 24 2011, 10:52:32 UTC
"I like making men orgasm. I’ve been told I’m very good at it,” -LOL-
loved that

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unwritten_ideas April 24 2011, 16:20:07 UTC
Hahaha, I liked that line too!

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shyone05 April 26 2011, 13:27:09 UTC
"I like making men orgasm. I’ve been told I’m very good at it,” - I love that. Watch out, You; hope you're ready to find out just how good he can be.... I hope
& Cha, gotta love Cha....

This sounds so true. Are you sure you weren't a fly on the wall during the tour? Good job, can't wait for more! :)

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unwritten_ideas April 26 2011, 16:34:36 UTC
Ahhh, we'll see if You gets to find out exactly how good Gackt is...

Let's see if it still seems realistic in a few parts time, hahaha.

Thanks for your comment!

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