PoT Fic: Recombinant Chapter 4

[universal_doll]

Okay, it seems I do have a couple of readers, so here's another chapter, and in this one the rest of the main characters start showing up. ^_^ Thanks very much for the encouragement guys, and please let me know what you think.

Title: Recombinant
Author: Dolly (universal_dollRating: PG to PG-13

Comments

[here2help_ann]

:) It's good so far...only thing that felt slightly OOC to me was whenever Echizen slipped on the bracelet, to me that doesn't seem like a thing he'd randomly do *shrug* but i'm guessing it has a purpose? lol...

*so totally on wrong account...lol...alchemic_ll

[universal_doll]

Glad you picked that up, it was supposed to seem out a bit unusual. ;) And you are quite correct, it does have a purpose.

Thanks for commenting! ^_^

Recombinant

[andersenmom]

Ah...

Tezuka's seeing it, too? Oooh.

So, what kind of weird things is happening to Fuji? And we want details on Eiji and Taka!

Nice job. Great work!

Re: Recombinant

[universal_doll]

Thanks for sticking with the story, I'm glad you're liking it! :) And there'll be more of Fuji as well as Eiji in the next Chapter, and that's the action begins as well.