Fic, Fujicest, "Only Self-Defence" for 30_lemons

[unexpectedtimes]

Part three of what was started by 1001 Tokyo Lights and continued by Letting Go.

Fuji has a conversation with Taka-san, and doesn't have a conversation with Yuuta.

I've never written anything quite like this before, so I hope it works...

Comments

[gottis_chan]

WOW. Powerful. More, please? *__*

[vanillafire]

I'm glad you enjoyed it! ♥ Oh man, there will definitely be more. There's at least another two parts lined up, and probably three. This story keeps running away with me and extending itself! I never envisioned writing this part as well, and then I never envisioned this part containing something that needed to be continued...! :o

Thank you for reading!

[gottis_chan]

You're so very welcome! ^^ I added another comment, just because. XD;;

And tell me about it. I know all about stories running away with you... >_>

[vanillafire]

Comments entertain me! And stop me doing kanji practice :D

It's simultaneously good and bad, isn't it? On the one hand, you get to write more of something that interests you, but on the other, you feel like you're being dragged along by a really big dog through hedges of doom. XD

[mojotmonkey]

...*whimper*

That's about all I can say. Just...*whimper*

Beautifully painful, though. And an interesting take on the theme, to. But still, I just keep coming back to ...*whimper*

(Though I'll admit, the image of Yuuta going Risky Business on us is so damn amusing...)

[vanillafire]

It made me whimper too! ;_; It's been killing me all week, and I have pretty much everything I want to do with it planned out now, and that's killing me too...! *cries* Stupid story! I want to zap Fuji with a taser, I really do!

And an interesting take on the theme

I'd been dreading having to use this theme, actually, because it seemed impossible because of their relationship as brothers, and a lot of possible executions of it squicked me, so I was pleased when I worked out what I wanted to do with this chapter and then found that the theme worked! :D I feel awful for doing this to Yuuta, though...

(XD XD That's a movie I'd pay to see! XD But then, I'd pay to see anything with Yuuta in it... >:D)

Thank you again for reading! ^__^

[mojotmonkey]

*fishes around for the taser Akutsu keeps in his bag and hands it over* :D

[vanillafire]

Oh God, Akutsu with a taser gives me the fear. He'd zap everything around him just to see what would happen! XD XD

*zaps Fuji anyway* >:D

[starlightstorm]

*just kind of flails*
He's ... he's so Fuji. The way you write him, it makes such sense for him to act this way, and even though I love him dearly I want to smack some sense into him. It's ... it's almost like he wanted Taka to not be okay with it because then he'd have an excuse, a reason; I don't know if he's just being masochistic or what, but it isn't good for either of them. They have to talk, and they won't, and ... well. It's very human, the way you write everyone here, and very characteristic of each of them.

*sighs and just kinda hopes things'll work out one way or another;;*

[vanillafire]

even though I love him dearly I want to smack some sense into him

ME TOO. I've literally spent all week saying things like "I HATE YOU, SHUUSUKE!" to anyone who'll listen. XD;; I really love him to bits, but he's being a numb-nut! His only saving grace is that it does make sense for him to be doing this, but maybe that's actually worse, because at least the other way, Yuuta would be going out with someone insane rather than just stupid! *sigh*

it's almost like he wanted Taka to not be okay with it because then he'd have an excuse, a reason

Nail on the head! He wasn't exactly expecting him to not be okay with it, because it's Taka-san and he's lovely, but he was hoping he'd be more disapproving, yes. He said to Yuuta he'd try, but he still believes he's doing the wrong thing for Yuuta, and he wants some proof of it so that he can end things. It is pretty masochistic, because he could just end things himself, could always have done, but he won't until he has some external stimulus, so he's keeping them in an unnecessary limbo that

[gottis_chan]

You rule, girl, this is just wonderful! Oh, and I friended you, is that okay? I'll unfriend you if you wanna, but your wonderful fics and your great lyrics... *melts*

[vanillafire]

Friending is more than okay - I'm always so excited when someone new friends this journal! *dorky* ♥ *adds you back* Thank you! :D (And telling me I rule always puts a smile on my face ^_~)

[alsie]

I...don't have any coherent thoughts. Or rather, I don't have anything that would make sense right now. But..wow. Just..wow.. I can't wait to read more of this..!!

Turning the volume of the stereo down, Yuuta said, very quickly, "You weren't interrupting anything. You saw nothing."

That little scene made me giggle. So much love. X3 I totally could see him doing that, too. Heeee

::squees for you:: ♥

[vanillafire]

That little scene made me giggle too! I can't remember what made me think of it (it was probably me wanting to do the same thing and play air guitar, I think XD), but I knew it had to go in. Yuuta = cutest thing ever. ♥

I can't wait to write more of this! It's completely eating my brain! :o

♥