The Fabulous Ladies Night Club (6/8)

[ubimod]

Title: The Fabulous Ladies Night Club
Author: ubiquirk
Rating: R
Genre: genfic: action-adventure, humor, drama
Word Count: ~14K
Character: Xander
Disclaimer: Not mine; no money.
AN: Set between S3 and S4 of Buffy. Written for

Comments

[hello_spikey]

yay! Jorge still alive! *wew*

Oh wait... less yay, Xanders knocked out and all he has is a couple chopsticks as a weapon...

[ubiquirk]

Thanks! It's great to hear that you like this part and Jorge alive!

[sparrow2000]

Things are not looking good for our boy, but I have faith in him - he has chopsticks, how could he lose - umm, once he wakes up, that is *g*

[ubiquirk]

Thanks! I'm really happy you're enjoying the fic!

[kargrif]

oh yay Jorge!! oh no Xander!! eck!! *hides eyes but peeks*

[ubiquirk]

Thanks! I'm so glad you like this part and the bit about Jorge!

[electricalgwen]

And how does Buffy always hide stakes in those outfits she wears? It’s like she’s got a mini TARDIS on her or something. *g*

Another lovely chapter. I like the descriptions of Kit's mind-bending. And "what is it with vampires and dark satin? Do they all get ‘setting the right gothic mood’ booklets when turned?" - hee!

[ubiquirk]

Thanks! It's lovely to hear that you liked this bit and yet another Xander geekgasm! And her mind-bending abilities - I figured thrall works differently for Dru and Drac, so why not Kit?

[brunettepet]

The description of Kit's hypnotic pull and Xander's avoidance are vivid, and I love the rising menace in Kit. Now she has Xander in her clutches, the mask has come off. She's very scary.

[ubiquirk]

Thanks! I'm so glad you're enjoying the progression of Kit's character and how things are playing out with Xander and her mind whammy!