Omens of The Nile Chapter 4

[ledishae]

Title: Omens of the Nile
Author: LediShae
Series/Verse: Transformers AU
Kink OP and/or Prompt: Death Mustang's Egypt prompt and WOI #19: 2. AU
Disclaimer: I own nothing, sadly not even the idea.
Summary: Akhetaton, capitol of Egypt, prays with each rising sun for a terrible curse upon Pharaoh’s sons to break. A prophecy from their birth tells of

Comments

[senna_chan]

Yes, yes, YES!!!!

I've been waiting for you to update this for so long!! *rushes to read*

- Senna-chan

[ledishae]

Thanks!

[senna_chan]

Now, a day later and after reading the chapter few times, I finally feel like I'm able to write something intelligent instead of some mindless squealing.

I do not know why, but this particular AU got me captivated from the very beginning. (Just like I stated in my review in FF.net over year ago) It's hard to say, just what makes me adore this story in particular. Is it the idea itself of this plot, or the way you've portrayed the characters or your writing style. It feels so, ah, regal. Yeah, that's what comes into my mind: you've managed to capture this mystical feeling into your words

[ledishae]

Huh, regal, I like that description.
Ratchet does have more red fur, on his hands, hips, and I think his legs but I'd have to go back to chapter ...2? I think. But yes, he does have more. As for the eye colors, yes, no one has noticed it but the twins in the sunlight flash the same flecks of colors in Ratchet's eyes, I'm using that as another omen. ^.^
Don't worry, long posts are fun!