as fic: 27 (katou/kira/setsuna)

[twelve]

Um, I was late, but that's only because I was unexpectedly... detained for more than a week. Let's just say that I went to a place where there's no internet or computer access, pens and pencils are considered dangerous and thus contraband items, and they don't allow you to wear those cute little berets in your hair, much less your shoes. That's all

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[twelve]

Thank you~

[wingblossom]

Y'know, this *feels* like Angel Sanctuary, chaotic and uncontrollable with a sense of underlying rhythm to it.

Set. Su. Na. The tongue playfully emerging slightly near the row of bottom teeth at su, but ducking back inside at na, like a turtle that pops its head back inside the shell once it realizes that there is nothing very interesting after all. A fucking tease. It was even in his name. And fools are fools are fools,

My favorite part. :)

[twelve]

And fools are fools are fools, just as he was one, and he dared open his eyes (virgins everywhere speak yet again of sinful, lethal, sweetly lethal mistakes, mistakes that are fatal, mistakes that occur as if with the patient's incognizant consent), and when he did, he saw Setsuna ruffling his hair free of dust.

This was my favorite part. Is there a meme that lets writers say what their favorite part of each story is? I'd do it in a heartbeat.

Thanks for the comment! => I really love AS, but (as usual) I can't help but feel I'm mangling/perverting the reader's sense of it, but if you say it feel like the real thing, then I'll take your word for it. XD