Fic: Marking the Distance (Supernatural, PG-13)

[twasadark]

Comments

Re: strong and vivid story

[twasadark]

Thanks so much!

[philomel]

I really love the way the near-internal quality of second person heightens the anxiety and disorientation in this. Sharply written. Really lovely. :)

[twasadark]

Wow, thank you so much for such a lovely comment! &hearts

[july_july_july]

Okay, I believe that the technical Aussie term is 'pash'. Yes, I wish to pash this.

"You don’t need to stay awake, Dean, you hear me? It’s okay, kiddo. You can sleep if you want. We’ll be at Pastor Jim’s in a few hours. He’ll fix you right up.”

*PASH* Thank you so much for writing it! It was exactly what I needed after today.

[twasadark]

Oh, good! I'm glad to give you a little bit of ficcery snuggles after today. And I learned a new word! Pash! Which reminds me of "posh." Posh Spice, to be exact. But perhaps I shouldn't go there. :-)

[july_july_july]

Yep. Still loves this. Still puts a smile on my face.

Also...I didn't even realize I used 'pash' the first time. Too much time around the Aussies. Occupational hazard.

*pashes fic anyway*

[kimmer1227]

You had to go break my heart at the end there, didn't you. Damn you, John!

[twasadark]

Sorry to remind you that John's a bit of a bastard, lol. Thanks for reading, though! :-)

[tifaching]

Beautiful fic. The 2nd person perspective was carried off perfectly. That was Dean's internal voice down pat. I'm glad John was there for Dean , but that last line just killed.

[twasadark]

Thanks so much for reading and commenting! I'm so glad you liked it! &hearts