Kingdom Hearts } Rise and Explode

Jun 22, 2010 21:47

Word Count: 1095
Genre: General
Ships?: Mentioned Sora/Kairi
Characters: Kairi, Xigbar
→Cameos: Pluto
→Mentions: Sora, Saïx, Axel, Braig
Rating: G, I think!
Spoilers: KHII - Sora's second visit to Twilight Town
Disclaimer: I do not own Kingdom Hearts or any related characters. This was written out of enjoyment of the series, and no profit is being ( Read more... )

# fan fic, [fandom] video game: kingdom hearts, [genre] general, [rating] g

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kaiyabeck June 23 2010, 02:24:24 UTC
Pff-- I love the way you write Xigbar, Tuna.

These characters play so well off each other. You can tell that Xigbar's having a blast making this little missy seethe, and that she's just exasperated by his playing with her.

She was a prisoner; it made sense that someone had to drop by every so often to make sure she was a good little girl and not disrupting nefarious plots.

I really loved this line-- you can just sense the bitterness in Kairi's tone as she's thinking this. And I could totally see this scene happening in canon-- Disney/Square would totally give you a fakeout of Xigbar's supposed "death". (Also the ending fff :c)

Great job once again, Tuna. <3

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ts_soliloquy June 23 2010, 02:46:36 UTC
N'awwwwww, Kaiya! ♥

Yeah, that's what I was sort of thinking. He definitely seemed to like faking out Sora at the beginning of his adventure, so why not mess with Kairi too? xD

Thank youuuuuu. ♥

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sparkism June 23 2010, 04:16:02 UTC
ksdjfjksdf lmao Xigbar would tease Kairi while she was being held prisoner. I love how you managed to fit this into canon context it makes this ship seem a liiittle less cracky aha I can totally see it happening in game. ♥ nicely done!

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ts_soliloquy June 23 2010, 04:30:04 UTC
N'aww, 'sank ya 'sank ya, Sparky Love! ♥

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ts_soliloquy June 23 2010, 15:48:59 UTC
Haha, probably! I figure in the end Xigbar was sorta glad to die because that meant reuniting with his pals in the afterlife, and that's why he smiles as he's dying.

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littlecatlost July 3 2010, 15:09:25 UTC
I don't know what to say that hasn't already been said by people far more awesome than me, so this will probably come out sounding kind lame. But here goes anyway.

I loved it! :D You've written Xigbar so wonderfully here. I love seeing him messing with people's heads, especially the heroes. Pffft! It works well for me as he's such a wily trickster in my mind. And this so is in canon!

His laugh contained something different before he disappeared in a haze of navy and purple. “So do I, Princess, so do I.”

Love the little hint of bittersweet emotion in this line. Nicely done! ♥♥♥♥

(PS: Sorry for the late comment. I was having some computer trouble for a while.)

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ts_soliloquy July 9 2010, 06:00:20 UTC
Haha, thank you Cat. ♥

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emo_precipitate July 3 2010, 15:26:13 UTC
ahahahah I have finally read this! 8D Now that I have a friggen day off from school and all.

OH MY GOSH I LOVE IIIIIIIIIIIT. ♥ IT'S SO EPIC.

thank you so much! ♥♥♥

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ts_soliloquy July 9 2010, 06:00:45 UTC
PFFFFF. You're quite welcome! ♥

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emo_precipitate July 9 2010, 11:12:00 UTC
Don't tease. D:
At least I was a month off, not a year off ♥
IT'S FABULOOOOOOOOOUS.

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