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Extravaganza - #5

Dec 25, 2011 03:07

Title: Mistletoe
Type: Slash
Rating: PG13
Word Count: 1386
Summary: There is a slight misunderstanding about who Jim wants to kiss under the mistletoe.
Notes: Written for Patt for Christmas time.
Warnings: A little angst and kissing.
Author: stargatesg1971

( Mistletoe )

christmas, seasonal, extravaganza, slash, stargatesg1971

Comments 8

magician113 December 25 2011, 20:54:00 UTC

That's it! I'm signing up both of these guys for a "how to communicate clearly the first time" class.

OTOH, that would deprive us of a lot of angsty stories. Thanks for this one.

stargatesg1971 December 31 2011, 17:49:07 UTC

Oh yes we don't want to deprive ourselves of lots of angsty fics now do we *vbg*.

Thanks for taking the time to leave me some feedback!

pattrose December 26 2011, 02:17:43 UTC

I loved this story, so wonderful. Thank you.

stargatesg1971 December 31 2011, 17:49:33 UTC

Your welcome. I'm glad you liked it.

carodee December 26 2011, 05:21:48 UTC

Reminiscing about last year's goofy mistletoe kissing fun is proooobably not the best way to start your sneaky romantic kissing this year, Jim. I'm just sayin'. Glad it all worked out though. Imagining Simon's face in last year's picture is absolutely hilarious! I bet they heard him yelling up at the North Pole!

stargatesg1971 December 31 2011, 17:51:50 UTC

I don't think Jim had a masterplan when he started this off, but like you, I'm glad it all worked out in the end. LOL about Simon, I had fun with that visual too. Thanks for taking the time to leave some feedback for me. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

laurie_ky December 27 2011, 23:05:37 UTC

Loved the teasing in the beginning and the not talking to each other came across as very relationship realistic. I liked that Blair didn't want to let it go on into the next day, though. Good for Naomi for setting that good example.

Love the idea of that Simon kiss, though. I wish somebody with the artistic talent could manip that one.

Poor Blair, sure he was going to be passed over, and then Jim being a little scared to show his hand, but doing it anyway. What was the grand plan, anyway, Jim. Were you going to kiss Blair in front of everybody and expect him to get that you were serious this time?

Nice story.

Laurie

stargatesg1971 December 31 2011, 17:56:19 UTC

Thanks for detailed feedback, Laurie! I'm glad you liked it.

I was quite partial to the thought of Jim foolin around and kissing Simon in a previous year too, hence its introduction into the story. Maybe when my muse is up to it, she might just take a dabble at that manip for ya :D

As for Jim's master plan, he didn't really have one coz he hadn't thought that far ahead.