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a little problem

Dec 13, 2009 00:06

Title: A Little Problem
Pairing: Yesung x Ryeowook
Rating: R
Word Count: 600+
Note: All you need to know about Yesung is that his hands are RIDICULOUSLY SMALL compared to his abnormally huge head and I sort of love him for his disproportions (and utter fail).
Warning: Crack. This fic has talk of male parts. You know what they say about men with ( Read more... )

p: ryeowook x yesung, g: super junior, t: drabbles, c: ryeowook, c: yesung

Comments 87

ky_rin December 13 2009, 05:07:10 UTC

obnoxiously obnoxious spotting.

I AM NOT A TYRANT >:| I DIDN'T DO ANYTHING.

...but so, welcome to the fandom :D like, as if you weren't in it weeks ago.

trivialaffair December 21 2009, 07:22:28 UTC

I accept your welcome XP. I've fallen so hard, I don't even know what to do with myself. Sigh.

ky_rin December 13 2009, 05:08:52 UTC

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trivialaffair December 21 2009, 07:22:49 UTC

STILL THE BEST PICTURE EVER ALKDFM.

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trivialaffair December 21 2009, 07:15:42 UTC

...yes, I am only now getting back to comments. My fail. Why. T__T

ky_rin December 13 2009, 05:43:25 UTC

"I'm not letting you go until you check me out," Yesung says determinedly, and Ryeowook sits back down on his bed with a near-sob.
CHECK IT OUT CHECK IT OUT YO

He glances up and notes Yesung’s I-will-have-my-way face, and he snaps. With Yesung, sometimes it was better just to grit your teeth and get things over and done with.
this paragraph says so much about your characterization of Ryeowook and Yesung, which I approve of.

Eventually, he manages to pull his jeans down enough to whip it out.
QUICKLY QUICKLY

Heechul told me that guys with big hands have really large dicks. And then he glanced at my hands and cackled at me.
CACKLE CACKLE CACKLE

Yesung cups himself uncertainly
my favourite line. and your favourite line. don't even lie.

Zhou Mi's voice sounds alarmed and deeply offended,
of course. classy like none of those hoes.

it's easier if you don't fight it. :D

catskilt December 13 2009, 07:28:22 UTC

everything she said, i am a resounding second.

nyw December 13 2009, 14:53:49 UTC

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

I AM WITH THIS COMMENT SO MANY TIMES, I GAVE UP WRITING MY OWN COMMENT ABOUT YOUR FIC.

trivialaffair December 21 2009, 07:17:37 UTC

T____________________________________________________T

...I believe that is all I can say at this point.

Just.

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trivialaffair December 21 2009, 07:19:05 UTC

LOL I'm happy you approve, because I seriously had no idea what I was doing. All I could think about was how this had to be written :D Thanks for reading!