Intercomm - Short Fic - Showing The Ropes

[dollysgirl04]

Title: Showing The Ropes
Author: dollysgirl04
Word Count: 1,143
Rating: R
Characters/Pairings: Allan/Guy, Allan, Guy, Much.
Genre: Romance
Spoilers: Season 3 from 3x11
Warnings: Slash, slight mentions of dub-con and bondage.
Disclaimer: Don’t own, just playing.
Notes: Guy wants Allan to show him the ropes after he joins the outlaws.

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Comments

[whytewytch4]

Ooooh, that Guy! He is like a devil on the shoulder, isn't he?
Very nice, very shudder-worthy.

[dollysgirl04]

Thank you XD Lol he is, but it's a good thing XD

[mai_shiranui]

This is very good. There's a very inescapable creepy tone to this. Excellent job!

[dollysgirl04]

Thank you XD Creepy is what I was going for XD I missed Guy's season 1 creepiness in the later episodes lol XD

[ctquill]

You've really captured the unsettling, seductive menace of Guy and Allan's ambivalence about him as he gets sucked back in. Excellent!

[dollysgirl04]

Thank you XD Creepy/hot Guy/Allan is my favourite to write XD Glad you liked it XD

[omteddy2006]

The show was much too quick to "move on." (I blame the short-sightedness of the writers as much as I possibly can.)

Allan would have loads of residual "angst" where Guy was concerned. The stories not yet written about Guy's time in the forest would fill an entire season of shows!

Agree with everyone...very creepy in a realistic way.

[dollysgirl04]

Thank you very much XD And I agree, they could have done so much with that on the show (damn writers), oh well, that's what fanfiction is for isn't it? Well that and bucket loads of p0rn XD

[amandajane17]

OOh all that delicious dark temptation...thank you.