Title: Stepping Sideways Into the Underground
Author:
toujourspret Disclaimer: Clearly, I don't own Inception. This is a work of fiction written by a fan for fans. Any resemblance to people or situations fictional or otherwise is pure coincidence.
Rating: R
Characters: Ariadne-centric, ensemble cast
Summary: The team takes a case that's different from the usual
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First of all, the characters fit their Wonderland rolls so well. I was a little in awe of the characters you've chosen for them to fit into and how well they got rolled up into the dream. It was fascinating.
Secondly, your attention to detail is magnificent here. The dead girls were vivid and horrid and essential to the story being seriously fucking creepy and disgustingly intense. Your Wonderful is scarily perfect in its description and the house is even scarier. When she runs from him and she's in the hallway with all the girls talking--it was seriously gave me shivers and made me super uncomfortable. Really well done.
The scene where they are digging is my favorite. She's clearly so confused and the young officer is a perfect mask here. And you've chased these scenes with little hints of layered plot! The totem conversations and Eames and Mal and the fact that Ariadne doesn't trust Cobb all leaks into the story at perfect moments.
This was great. I loved it.
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