Cut challenge: Ties: Food: Paper: Path

Sep 29, 2017 02:42

Title: When Is A Home Not A Home? A series of four drabbles
Author: Kortirion
Characters: Aragorn/Estel, Elrohir, Elladan
Rating: G
Source: Pre-Ring War
Disclaimer: Tolkien - to him belonga all.

When Is A Home Not A Home? )

challenge: cut: food, character: estel, challenge: cut : ties, author: kortirion, character: aragorn, character: elladan, challenge: cut: path, character: elrohir, challenge: cut: paper

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shirebound September 29 2017, 11:48:38 UTC
The brothers’ golden thoughts blanketed Estel’s confusion

That's a very nice line. What a dilemma for these loving brothers, both of a healing line, wondering how much to help... and how much to stand back and let Aragorn find his own way. Most of us can understand that dilemma very well from our own lives.

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kortirion October 16 2017, 22:54:05 UTC
Thanks - I wanted them to support, but not be too 'helicopter'... as they say!

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engarian September 29 2017, 14:01:08 UTC
It's difficult when watershed life events come and people must deal. I loved your take on this - the twins, so caring and still not wanting to interfere directly, and Aragorn, a bit raw from the new circumstances and duties, trying to do his best but hesitant to establish his boundaries. Marvelous!

- Erulisse (one L)

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kortirion October 16 2017, 22:54:37 UTC
Thanks very much. I'm pleased you enjoyed it.

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rs9 September 30 2017, 00:00:59 UTC
Wow... I love this...

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kortirion October 16 2017, 22:54:50 UTC
Thank you!

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lindahoyland September 30 2017, 02:07:17 UTC
Lovely.

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kortirion October 16 2017, 22:55:05 UTC
My pleasure!

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curiouswombat September 30 2017, 20:06:29 UTC
I really like this take on this transition from Imladris to the outside world, and his brothers trying to give no more support than is necessary.

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kortirion October 16 2017, 22:56:35 UTC
Thanks - still got to write the completion of this challenge... and I'm already two behind for the next one!

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