This, Kai, omg, CRYING. This is the kind of story that cannot be absorbed in one sitting.
I want to say so much to you, but where do I even start? T___T I can't do the usual copy and paste lines I like because I DON'T KNOW WHERE TO START OR END.
As always, it's the little details you put in that always makes your stuff so realistic - things like shoes squeaking slightly against the linoleum floor - it's what injects such realism into the story and makes it believable, and I can practically close my eyes and visualise the entire scene.
Siwon's night terrors, and confusion, and his boredom with his mundane job - all perfectly captured, and his meeting with Geng on the train too. I see what you mean about surreal, because Siwon and his sleep-fogged mind and him believing it's a dream... just... WOW.
Siwon is twenty-five years old, a Korea University graduate with a double major in accounting and economics, and works for a respectable accounting firm
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;___________________; your ridiculously long comments always make me happy ♥ There was a part of me that wanted to rewrite some of this but another part that sort of wanted to scream and run as fast as possible away from it :| ...the perfectionist won out, though, so I edited a few parts where I found the flow to be kind of weird.
The dancing at the studio part is probably my favourite too ♥ SO glad you liked it *wipes away tears* I don't ship SiHan either, really, though I don't not ship it... though writing this (frantic as it was) kind of makes me want to write them more. BUT WE'LL SEE, because I have 20+ WIPs that are screaming out for my attention. XDDDD oh God *looks dubiously at WIPs file*
<333333 how's your fic going, btw? Actually wait I can probably go online ahah, after I finish writing this :P
Omo this was so beautifully written... the flow is perfect! Their past, their present... Siwon's mundane life, Siwon's dreams... The in-between... the moments of them together, which makes perfect... the hope, the love, the little things... urgh... ♥♥♥♥♥ *MEMS*
Ahh I'm so glad the flow was good ♥ I was worrying about that when I was writing it, so I'm really happy you mentioned it! Thank you for reading and for the mem :'DDD
And about Geng's necklace, uh, that was one part in the plot I didn't get to fully explain before I had to submit it for the challenge. I will probably write a short fic about it's relevance in this AU in the future - but for now, you can be curious but you don't have to worry ^^;;
this was all sorts of gorgeous and amazing and heartbreaking and realistic ;_; I think my heart broke and got pieced together so many different times during this fic.
the whole story was written beautifully- the words, the phrasing and the format. It's extremely emotional and leaves me kinda aching but in a good way XD Just, them together like this. I can completely imagine it.
I always write in hopes that what I've written seems realistic, so I'm really happy you could imagine them like this! Thank you so much for reading and commenting ♥ I'm glad the ache is a good one :P
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I want to say so much to you, but where do I even start? T___T I can't do the usual copy and paste lines I like because I DON'T KNOW WHERE TO START OR END.
As always, it's the little details you put in that always makes your stuff so realistic - things like shoes squeaking slightly against the linoleum floor - it's what injects such realism into the story and makes it believable, and I can practically close my eyes and visualise the entire scene.
Siwon's night terrors, and confusion, and his boredom with his mundane job - all perfectly captured, and his meeting with Geng on the train too. I see what you mean about surreal, because Siwon and his sleep-fogged mind and him believing it's a dream... just... WOW.
Siwon is twenty-five years old, a Korea University graduate with a double major in accounting and economics, and works for a respectable accounting firm ( ... )
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The dancing at the studio part is probably my favourite too ♥ SO glad you liked it *wipes away tears* I don't ship SiHan either, really, though I don't not ship it... though writing this (frantic as it was) kind of makes me want to write them more. BUT WE'LL SEE, because I have 20+ WIPs that are screaming out for my attention. XDDDD oh God *looks dubiously at WIPs file*
<333333 how's your fic going, btw? Actually wait I can probably go online ahah, after I finish writing this :P
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Their past, their present... Siwon's mundane life, Siwon's dreams...
The in-between... the moments of them together, which makes perfect... the hope, the love, the little things... urgh... ♥♥♥♥♥
*MEMS*
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And about Geng's necklace, uh, that was one part in the plot I didn't get to fully explain before I had to submit it for the challenge. I will probably write a short fic about it's relevance in this AU in the future - but for now, you can be curious but you don't have to worry ^^;;
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Thanks for reading and commenting!
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the whole story was written beautifully- the words, the phrasing and the format. It's extremely emotional and leaves me kinda aching but in a good way XD Just, them together like this. I can completely imagine it.
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