Fic: The Aleph (Clark/Bruce) (WIP) (2 of ?)

[tmelange]

Title: The Aleph
Author: tmelange
Pairing: Clark/Bruce
Fandom: Smallville/DCU
Rating: Adult
Tags: Plot-Intensive, Bruce in Smallville, Young Clark and Bruce, Memory Loss, First Time Meeting/Sex, Romance, Drama
Status: WIP
Warnings: Slash, m/m sex
Summary: Clark Kent meets Bruce Wayne for the first time under very strange circumstances.

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[tmelange]

You know, that icon looks so nice colored in. I liked the lineart, but the colored version is very eye-catching. :)

>>I love things like this. All mixed up in time, no memory, etc!!!!

I couldn't resist making it all complicated somehow, LOL.

Thanks for reading and commenting, Mer. I appreciate it. :hugs:

[schala_kid]

Bruce started crying, deep heart-wrenching sobs for a woman he didn't even remember.

Oh Bruce...I am pretty sure that deep down buried inside of him there was the memory or feeling of losing his parents and I bet it just resurfaced when Clark told him his mom had died.

Kid!Bruce eeek! I can just picture him doing kid things like geting in trouble and eating lots of candy yet I can see him doing things no normal kids would do (you know the creepy bat things).

Besides Kid!Bruce has his benefits, he can get between Clark and Lex and latch onto Clark like a bee on honey and there's nothing Lex can do about it.

[tmelange]

>.I bet it just resurfaced when Clark told him his mom had died.

That's exactly what I was thinking. Bruce can't be Bruce without the angst over his dead parents. LOL

>>I can just picture him doing kid things like geting in trouble and eating lots of candy yet I can see him doing things no normal kids would do (you know the creepy bat things).

LMAO, yeah. Kid Bruce is going to be...fun, and a handful for big brother Clark.

>>Besides Kid!Bruce has his benefits, he can get between Clark and Lex and latch onto Clark like a bee on honey and there's nothing Lex can do about it.

Yes, Kid Bruce and Lex equals oil and water. LOL Lex won't know what hit him. ;)

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, schala. You are a doll. :))

[luxluthor]

You clever girl!!
Please write more
::shamelessly begging::

[tmelange]

Coming right up!

Thanks for reading and commenting, dearest. :)

[apuppydarkly]

Yay! The mystery revealed - a little, anyway. There is still so much to be discovered. Poor little Bruce, crying for his kidnapper and thinking he's lost his parents again

[tmelange]

Thank you very much for the edit. I made that change yesterday, right after you commented, and did very much appreciate the save. :))

>>I love your Bruce in this. He's so principled, even when he's being his non-hero self.

This is my Batman-lite version of Bruce. LOL Early in his career, without the dark edges. I guess he's more movieverse than recent comicverse, but it definitely is a relief to write him in a less conflicted way.

>>Hee! Does poor Bruce have ulcers? Or is he just stressed out? This is a nice little humanizing detail.

I figured if he spent his evening throwing himself off buildings, he'd have a hard time keeping food down. LOL Plus all the stress. I like little things that show that it's not *easy* being a superhero.

>>Awesome. He's just so matter-of-fact and calm, even in the face of unknown danger.

I always thought Batman would have to have nerves of steel. LOL

Thanks so much for reading, dearest. I do very much appreciate it. :hugs:

[greeneyelove]

I was thrilled to find the second part up! This is a wonderful fic. I love the set up and I can't wait to see how things go from here.

[tmelange]

I wanted to try to get up three chapters, so the readers would at least know what's going on, and how the story would progress in the past and in the future.

I'm so glad you're enjoying it!

Thanks for reading and commenting, Lisa. :hugs: