THE AKAME MASS COMMENT FICCY THING! ROUND THREE.

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...we should just rename this to That Akame Fic Thing >> As usual:

PROMPT. WRITE. STALK. BRING YOUR FRIENDS.

Things you can do include: prompting without writing; writing without prompting; prompting/writing any rating from g to nc-17; picture prompts!; prompting/writing drama incarnations of akame in any combination that tickles your fancy (i.e

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[anonymous]

"You don't have to do this," Kame says; the knowledge of the futility of any protest doesn't stop him from trying. Jin's expression is fiercely determined despite his casual stance, and a strong wind filled with magic makes Kame's clothing billow in the wind, the white a stark contrast to the inky darkness surrounding them. He's on Jin's turf now, and it shows: Jin completely at home, eyes accustomed to the dark glow their surroundings cast, black tanktop and pants blending in and yet shimmering eerily in the dusky light whenever he moves. His charmed bracelets stand out on his pale skin, and Kame can't help but remember when they were younger, when Jin laughed and rolled with him in their soft bed, both of them becoming hopelessly tangled in the sheets and each other, and the way Jin's eyes had softened when Kame had slipped those bracelets on his wrist and said "to keep you with me for as long as possible

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[matchynishi]

o-oh my god this is BRILLIANT. *_*_*_* Idek the CLAMP universe, but this is seriously so great lsjdfd. I love the way you worked in the past and the present, and the comparison and laskjfksj CANNOT WAIT FOR MORE LAKSDJFA. *___*

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[lonelybusiness]

SCREAM, SCREAMING SO HARD. ILU ANON. Aaskljjkfa everything is so perfect and I loved the scene of them in bed together and everything in the setting is pitched in that special CLAMP way, dajf;ljdf CLOTHES BILLOWING IN THE WIND. <33333

Thank you thank you thank you.

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[faire_estela]

The whole deal about the eyes, that's so. So. Guuuuuuh i really have no words *___* The bracelet story? Beautiful, perfect, just like the confrontation and the black/white contrast and the Akame and there'll be more of this because there's a 1:/ up there, rite? *_________*

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[sapphynashi]

adkjssfahjsk CLAMP UNIVERSE oh god the eye thing lakhdfja I love the visuals omg it's like picturing a scene right out of a manga in CLAMP style. T____T ♥

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[anonymous]

Jin shrugs and simply says "I like presents from you," the bracelets glinting in the dim light when he reaches up to tuck his hair behind his ears. The action is rendered useless when he tilts his head in that same way he had when he was younger, and his hair falls in his eyes again, but it's different, and the eyes that watch him carefully are - different.

"I told you it was on loan," Kame replies, almost teasing, raising an eyebrow; he's always been good at faking the confidence, but even now Jin only purses his lips, stifling a smile. He used to laugh when Kame tried to impress people, saying you're such a crappy actor - why can't you just be you? with that slight undertone of irritation. Jin used to pull him away at the school parties, made him eat and laugh before letting him back into the crowds, after he watched Kame obsessively smooth down his coat and tug the wrinkles from his soft white gloves. He'd leave Kame with a grin, sliding through the crowds to find his other friends, a sleek figure in all black. Jin was popular,

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[anonymous]

*startling

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[lonelybusiness]

eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee, there's moar. *_*

I love how you weave past incidents within the narrative and how it builds up to the action. ah;ljakfla anticipation. <333333

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[matchynishi]

aaaah this is so wonderful. *_______* sorry for the late reply, but i'm still catching up on this meme alskdjfs. slowly... T_T

Jin and Kame and lskdjfsd I love the tension you've created, and alksdjaj I LOVE IT <3333