Challenge 28

Mar 27, 2010 17:10

Missing Her, Tenth Doctor/Rose, rating adult
You miss the girl of stars and rain
You miss the wolf of gold
You miss the girl who held your hand
The one who held your hearts, 371 words

Missing Her )

:jessalrynn, challenge 28

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thatlibrarylady March 27 2010, 22:01:24 UTC
This is powerful and beautiful and so heartbreaking. I love the way you covered all the aspects of their relationship. Words can't really describe how much I like this. Well done!

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jessalrynn March 28 2010, 23:32:40 UTC
Thank you so much. I'm very glad you like it.

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jessalrynn March 28 2010, 23:32:50 UTC
Thank you so much!

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sapphire_child March 28 2010, 03:10:54 UTC
This is so gorgeous and lyrical and I love how you haven't compromised the meaning of the poem with the rhyming - it's all just spot on. Beautifully done.

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jessalrynn March 28 2010, 23:34:12 UTC
Thank you very much. Yes, rhyming poetry can be very tricky sometimes in my opinion, and you can end up with some atrocious rhymes if you're not careful or, as you mentioned, lose the meaning. I'm glad it works for you. Thanks!

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morrighangw March 28 2010, 03:22:00 UTC
Oh, the rhythm and emotion in this are fabulous. I love me some angst, sometimes. =D

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jessalrynn March 28 2010, 23:34:55 UTC
Thank you so much. I tried to catch that heartache they gave me... :-) Thanks.

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scifiangel May 22 2016, 15:13:13 UTC
Wow. I'm crying right now and I'm not just saying that.

This is so very powerful and beaugiful.

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