Missing Her, Tenth Doctor/Rose, rating adult You miss the girl of stars and rain You miss the wolf of gold You miss the girl who held your hand The one who held your hearts, 371 words
This is powerful and beautiful and so heartbreaking. I love the way you covered all the aspects of their relationship. Words can't really describe how much I like this. Well done!
This is so gorgeous and lyrical and I love how you haven't compromised the meaning of the poem with the rhyming - it's all just spot on. Beautifully done.
Thank you very much. Yes, rhyming poetry can be very tricky sometimes in my opinion, and you can end up with some atrocious rhymes if you're not careful or, as you mentioned, lose the meaning. I'm glad it works for you. Thanks!
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This is so very powerful and beaugiful.
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