Fic: All They Want to Do is: One Shot

[thementalone]

All They Want to Do Is

Comments

[velvet_midnight]

Have I mentioned I love you? lol. FANTASTIC. Hot & beautiful. LOVE IT, LOVE IT.

Fav part:
Well, for one, the ENTIRE ENDING PART. (hehehee, brain!twins FTW)

There's too many one-liner's to mention, but this:

Will rolled his eyes and pulled Marian’s shoulders down to kiss her again, and she whimpered and groaned against him again, his tongue running against hers, his running over hers in the smooth sensual motion exactly like the way he and Allan were both moving.

is great. Cos it's hot & got the whole Will/Allan thing. The banter before it: hysterical, like I said.

*massive squee-ing glomp* THANK YOU THANK YOU. xD

[thementalone]

Eee. I'm so happy you like it!

Brain twins activate! Lol. :D

[precious_rosie]

Woooo! :-D Just the thing for grey, wet Monday morning! :-D Luscious! ;-D

[thementalone]

:D Thank you Rosie!!

[thinklast]

LOL WILL/ALLAN/GUY/MARIAN FTW.

[thementalone]

Bahaha they're made of win. :D

[tehuberfangirl]

Hehe Will/Allan banter while sexin Marian I love it.

[thementalone]

Hehe thanks. I thought it fit them well. :)