Hand to Hand, Hand to Mouth, Chapter 17

[thelasteuropean]

Sorry about the wait on this chapter. It was a bit of a wrestle. I've learnt that sometimes stories want to go places that I didn't initially mean for them to go. Ah well

Comments

[usagimylene]

Hey there. I found you from the fire cracker community and I just wanted to say I'm loving this story! :D

Actually I Love all your Jubilee fan fics.

[thelasteuropean]

Hee! I'm glad you're enjoying. Ta very much for dropping a comment.

[crispygecko]

heeheehee!

yea, I don't have any really constructive comments to make. I love the flow of this story, and the conversational details (like the heaping bowlful of bitchies) are awesome and totally in character. :)

[thelasteuropean]

-^_^- Ta! I've been really struggling with this story, so I'm very glad you're enjoying it. The bowlful of bitchies line almost had to be cut, but I liked it so much that I bloody well forced it to work.