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The Hidden Storm, Part Three- RPS, NC-17

May 08, 2009 16:49

Fandom: RPS
Title: The Hidden Storm (a thejealoussea story), Part Three ( Read more... )

the hidden storm

Comments 9

havenward May 9 2009, 00:51:16 UTC

Words. I have none... So pretty, and hot, and hurty, and... With the gorgeous words...

yanzadracan May 9 2009, 02:34:01 UTC

Do anyone tell the pirate no? Bet not. Exellent

nighean_isis May 9 2009, 08:09:35 UTC

you posted! Um...is guh! good feedback?

:D

elebridith May 9 2009, 16:44:00 UTC

I second the GUH!!! Whoa.

sgfansean May 10 2009, 03:43:04 UTC

Good Grief, how I love this story. GAH! I had forgotten how very sexy and menacing that Christian is in it.

And poor Steven having to let Christian have his way with his wife. That part was both shocking and sad when I was reading it.

Please don't wait in updating the next chapter. I want to see what happens next! Steven needs his captain's touch just as much as his captain needs to give it to him. Mmmmm. Touching.

*dies*