Comments | thehighwaywoman: "The Road Goes Ever On" (28/30) (Sam/Dean)

thehighwaywoman

"The Road Goes Ever On" (28/30) (Sam/Dean)

Apr 19, 2008 13:25

The Road Goes Ever On (28/30)
(3100 words) *facepalm*

Warnings: Teenchesters (Sam is 16, Dean is 20)
Alternate reality/pre-series.
Rated: Adult (Mild Wincest, natural/supernatural violence, disturbing themes)

Links to previous installments under the cut.

( The sun's bright now that it's come out from behind all those heavy clouds, shining down so sharp and proud Dean thinks he might get a sunburn. He knows he'll end up with an odd dozen or more new freckles scattered over the backs of his hands and his nose. _Awesome_. )

the road goes ever on, teenchesters, sam/dean, serial fic

Comments 43

insaneboingo April 19 2008, 17:38:19 UTC

OMFG! SERIOUSLY!? You can't do this to me. I'm too young to have a heart attack.

Dammit, and I knew he was going to be there too.

Alright, so, tomorrow? Needs to come way faster.

thehighwaywoman April 19 2008, 17:56:34 UTC

/o\ I don't know where this tendency to evil has come from. I swear, I used to be a nice, wholesome... okay, I wasn't always this bad. :">

Take heart; Dean's pretty pissed off here. Tomorrow is coming soon...

Thanks for reading!

mad_cat_grin April 19 2008, 17:45:50 UTC

Dear God!

bad cliffie!

ok, so I haven't commented up until now but I really wanted to say how much I am loving this story. it's something I look forward too every day and believe me when I say I don't have many things to look forward to at the moment. Lovely story. I can't wait for more and I really hope John doesn't screw things up for the boys!

wendy April 19 2008, 17:49:40 UTC

EEEE! Seriously, every chapter of this story makes me squeak at the end.

I love how Dean is all determined but shy to talk to Sam about their future. And I hate the despair in my gut now that John is back to ruin it.

delphinapterus April 19 2008, 18:04:44 UTC

I love how quiet and warm this chapter is. It has beautiful imagery with the boys sitting with each other. I love how the "what if" game takes off from just general things that would be nice to a specific fantasy of them together and happy without John. It's the without John part that I actually find the most interesting especially given how Dean felt about him in the beginning. They've both really grown up over the course of the story and it's very cool to see that. I can't believe there's only two more chapters left.

pizzapixie April 19 2008, 18:07:11 UTC

"Dad sits on the hood of the Impala, cleaning a long-barreled gun. Waiting. For them."
The fan? And the excretment? Meeting tomorrow.I cannot wait.