Comments | thehighwaywoman: Twelve Days of Ficmas, Day #6: "Kiss Me, Teriyaki Jerky Lips" (J2)

thehighwaywoman

Twelve Days of Ficmas, Day #6: "Kiss Me, Teriyaki Jerky Lips" (J2)

Dec 25, 2007 10:07

Title: Kiss Me, Teriyaki Jerky Lips
Word Count: 580
Wot's It All About? For just_ruth Ficmas prompt: bad coffee. The morning after too much holiday indulgence for J2. Humor, morning breath, cold coffee and, despite all that, smooching.

( Jared grumbles, handily conveying his own hidden message, which is that he made the coffee and Jen should already damn well have known it'd be awful. )

Comments 24

thelinus December 25 2007, 15:34:38 UTC

hee! adorable. and for some (really inexplicable) reason, i find the boys with morning breath the cutest and sweetest and schmoopiest thing in the world. because they STILL love each other and suck face like it's about to go out of fashion! *happy sigh*

thank you for posting all these gorgeous fics, by the way! &hearts

thehighwaywoman December 26 2007, 15:24:02 UTC

I agree re: morning breath. I surely wouldn't want a faceful of it myself ;-) but it's endearing somehow when guys adore each other even though a blast of old teriyaki and salt.

And thank you for all the lovely comments! ♥

just_ruth December 25 2007, 16:27:41 UTC

Just wonderful! Cute and schmoop and a good dose of reality. Love it from the candy-cane print on Jared's face to the dip and the awful coffee in between!

Bones-Supernatural Crossover

thehighwaywoman December 26 2007, 15:22:45 UTC

Yay! I'm so, so pleased that you enjoyed what I wrote for your prompt. Writing silliness and schmoop is so much fun, but I think I'm going to have to do something seriously angsty next or risk losing my soul to pink fluff, no matter how much I love the warm fuzzies. Y'know?

Ooh, thanks for the link, too! *goes to check it out*

just_ruth December 26 2007, 22:28:52 UTC

Join me, Luke. Come to the fluff side and together we will conquer the galaxy! Mwah-ha-ha-ha! *deep breathing*

veleda03 December 25 2007, 17:09:36 UTC

this was just too cute!!

thehighwaywoman December 26 2007, 15:15:21 UTC

Aww, thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :-)

fromyourashes December 25 2007, 17:50:59 UTC

d'oh, jeez, I'm feeling all sorts of SMOOSHY right now. Sheesh. MERRY CHRISTMAS, DOLL!

thehighwaywoman December 26 2007, 15:16:12 UTC

Schmoooooooooooooooop attack *g* I'm so glad you enjoyed this, and thank you for the comment!

deanshot December 25 2007, 18:37:14 UTC

This was just awwwwwwwwwww.
Loved this mushy stuff.

Sleep induced talking, Jared is so adorable.
Thanks for this, it was simply sweet.

*Hugs you Tight*

thehighwaywoman December 26 2007, 15:17:18 UTC

Mushiness is just too much fun, although I think I may have to write something really angsty soon to balance it out *g*

Jared just seems like he'd be such a cuddlebug in any circumstance, doesn't he?

*hugs back* Thank you for the comments!