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Fic: Guardian at Hell's Gate (1/1)

Mar 09, 2008 15:39

Title: Guardian at Hell's Gate
Author: thefrogg
Beta: fluffnutter
Rating: FRAO
Summary: #4 in the Salt!verse

( Something was wearing them down. )

fic, salt!verse, spn

Comments 4

sylvanwitch March 9 2008, 23:35:13 UTC

I believe I've said this before, but in case I have not, DAMN (imagine that in Ash's voice, if you please, all drawn-out like and red-necky) you have a way with the angst! It's so pretty, it's pettable. I love Bobby's POV, his imagining what he's seeing, his reaction, subtly given by the tears in his beard. This is really beautifully done, very touching. Bravo!

thefrogg March 10 2008, 00:56:54 UTC

Thank you! Of all the people that have been killed on the show, I think I miss Ash the most.:( Someone needs to figure out how to bring him back.

I've been known for doing mostly angst since I was a teenager. These days, my fic seems to come in two flavors - angst and shmoop.

Thanks again! Bobby's still a bit rough for me, mainly because he's, well, not a regular character. So, yeah, still trying to get a handle on him.

albeitslowly March 10 2008, 00:45:12 UTC

Oh, honey, I love this. I think this is the best installment in this verse so far. Just lovely.

And psst...one little typo:

The pile of notes on the tale grew Might be table?

But man, I love how Bobby is so attentive and just knows something's wrong. *draws hearts around Bobby*

thefrogg March 10 2008, 00:47:45 UTC

::blush:: Thank you.

Fixed!::facepalm:: Thanks for pointing that out. It's an error I make all the time.

Bobby's just so...so Bobby, you know?