Wow, this was amazing. Wonderful characterizations, and I love all the tormented feelings and angst. As for the sex, well. The part that got me was Robert saying "honey." Brava on all fronts.
(And the editor in me was flagging all the typos and still loving this, so no worries. I barely read slash before this fandom but hot damn I would beta for you in a heartbeat baby.)
Yay!!! Oh dude, you maybe made my day, so I think I'm a bit more of a dork, lol.
So yes, I shall friend and message you? I'm going to be doing the bigbang for Holmes stuff (sherlockian, not rpf) and little else. As far as I can tell, since my writing is usually sporadic and I'm working on original stuff as well.
Anyway, thanks so much, and by all means spare not my feelings. I occasionally write with poor grammar in order to emphasise certain things, but usually it's just my abysmal handle on it. haha. You're a champ, buhbye, off to go friend you.
-offers fresh baked cookies and my mothers first born (she's 30 now, but she does make good toasties)- OH...My gosh. I actually finished reading this about ten minutes ago, but I had to have a glass of water and a snack before I became even slightly coherent. Like. Seriously. I love Jude! I love how awkward he is! And BobbyBobBob! And Susan! AND GUY'S GAY JOKES! And I love the moments where Jude is like, almost a virginal 13 year old because he's totally gay for RDJ! And I think I'm going to read this again before I go to bed and then favourite it so I can read it again as soon as I get up.
And once I've mastered reading in my sleep, I'll do it then, too.
I can't even.... and you.... you just........ with....... FUCKING GENIUS....... and....... yeah..... I fink I wantz to hav ur babehs. Shall we be married on the morrow??? Seriously though *melted brain is MELTED* I'd ask for a sequel, but the caliber of this plus my bungled words of fangirling that the majority of this comment consists of makes me feel like an A-class selfish cunt.... so..... I'll not. BUT. I will think it telepathically rly hardz in the hopez that ur ninja awesomeness (which you so clearly possess) hears my silent plea.... *SRS PAINFUL-LOOKIN EXPRESSION* ily, u haz sum skillz mai frend. <3
I have to pile on and let you know how amazing this is. It's painful and hopeful and hot and oh so emotionally real, and true to their characters that you see in interviews. I'm a total whore for explorations of any kind of non-monogamy, and this is one of the best I've read. You make me weak in the knees.
So like. I actuallu read this when it was first posted! And I loved the shit out of it! No idea why I didn't comment then, but HERE I AM FINALLY. 8D
I love absolutely everything about this, the progression and the speech patterns and SUSAN OMG and then. then of course the sefljel;kfh;sakdjfhaskdjbf ican'teven it's just too goddamn hot. The bit that gets me like NOTHING ELSE is We’re gonna fuck now honey, okay? and I don't even know why, but OHHH MANNNN. Yes. That is a good line.
(This comment brought to you by a late-night everything-RDJ binge set off by the Oscars red carpet. CHRIST, RDJ.)
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(And the editor in me was flagging all the typos and still loving this, so no worries. I barely read slash before this fandom but hot damn I would beta for you in a heartbeat baby.)
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Also, was that last comment placatory or an offer, because I would totally take you up on it if it were.
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It was an offer! I'm a dork and I love editing. And reading fic, haha.
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So yes, I shall friend and message you? I'm going to be doing the bigbang for Holmes stuff (sherlockian, not rpf) and little else. As far as I can tell, since my writing is usually sporadic and I'm working on original stuff as well.
Anyway, thanks so much, and by all means spare not my feelings. I occasionally write with poor grammar in order to emphasise certain things, but usually it's just my abysmal handle on it. haha. You're a champ, buhbye, off to go friend you.
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OH...My gosh. I actually finished reading this about ten minutes ago, but I had to have a glass of water and a snack before I became even slightly coherent. Like. Seriously.
I love Jude! I love how awkward he is! And BobbyBobBob! And Susan! AND GUY'S GAY JOKES!
And I love the moments where Jude is like, almost a virginal 13 year old because he's totally gay for RDJ!
And I think I'm going to read this again before I go to bed and then favourite it so I can read it again as soon as I get up.
And once I've mastered reading in my sleep, I'll do it then, too.
Spectacularr. <3
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I fink I wantz to hav ur babehs. Shall we be married on the morrow???
Seriously though *melted brain is MELTED*
I'd ask for a sequel, but the caliber of this plus my bungled words of fangirling that the majority of this comment consists of makes me feel like an A-class selfish cunt.... so..... I'll not. BUT. I will think it telepathically rly hardz in the hopez that ur ninja awesomeness (which you so clearly possess) hears my silent plea.... *SRS PAINFUL-LOOKIN EXPRESSION*
ily, u haz sum skillz mai frend.
<3
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So like. I actuallu read this when it was first posted! And I loved the shit out of it! No idea why I didn't comment then, but HERE I AM FINALLY. 8D
I love absolutely everything about this, the progression and the speech patterns and SUSAN OMG and then. then of course the sefljel;kfh;sakdjfhaskdjbf ican'teven it's just too goddamn hot. The bit that gets me like NOTHING ELSE is We’re gonna fuck now honey, okay? and I don't even know why, but OHHH MANNNN. Yes. That is a good line.
(This comment brought to you by a late-night everything-RDJ binge set off by the Oscars red carpet. CHRIST, RDJ.)
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