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kelkat9 November 11 2011, 05:15:08 UTC
I love the dragon! The picture I have in my brain of Theta riding that dragon is just...freaking amazing. That made me really happy! Oh and his sparing Admar's life was very doctory. So you must have at least one more chapt to go on this I'm hoping. This has just been the most amazing story.

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tenandi November 11 2011, 05:31:55 UTC
It does kind of sound like the ending, from the wording. Fortunately it's not, and we've still got a little ways to go. :D

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fogsblue November 11 2011, 06:44:17 UTC
Brilliant! The way you gave Theta the emotional side needed to give mercy, in a manner of speaking was just perfectly Doctor-ish, especially using Rose as his guide.

I'm glad the story isn't over quite yet, I'll miss it when it's finished :(

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tenandi November 12 2011, 00:09:05 UTC
Thank you, thank you! We'll have to make sure it goes out with a bang then...

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annissag November 11 2011, 12:38:28 UTC
I really love the way you write action scenes! You paint such vivid pictures. I also like the resolution between Theta and Zeta and how Theta did not stoop to killing the Inquisitor. I do wonder what's in store for him, though. Aside from the dragon ride, I think my favorite part was Rose stepping in at the end, saving Theta from an awkward political situation.

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tenandi November 11 2011, 14:11:13 UTC
Yes! She's always there when she's needed, in every capacity :D

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tenfani November 11 2011, 22:09:38 UTC
sighs... Yeah, peace at last.
The Doctor riding a dragon is just "wow". Is there a possibility to let her be a lullaby child?

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tenandi November 12 2011, 00:08:23 UTC
That depends, what is a lullaby child?

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tenfani November 12 2011, 20:16:31 UTC
giggles... Well, perhaps a wonderful dragon without the lust to destroy.
They don't have a Tardis, but with a dragon, they could travel.

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tenandi November 13 2011, 04:20:13 UTC
Ah! I see! That would be preferable. Too bad the Nightmare Child is, well...a complete nightmare. Only a Time Lord would love her. I think Rose would demand better accommodations too. Just between you and me, I'm fairly sure the dragon is incredibly stinky.

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