Old Clichés [1/1]

[teenwitch77]

Title: Old Clichés [1/1]
Characters/Pairings: Veronica, Logan/Veronica
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 2400
Spoilers/Warnings: Spoilers for 2x22 Not Pictured.
Summary: Maybe there’s something to be said for those clichéd old love songs. Veronica and Logan head to Mexico to chase a lead on a case… and end up resolving a few issues in their relationship.

Comments

[steph0202]

Awesome work.

It amazes me how you can fit so much feeling and plot into one little story. Great work with the awkwardness of LoVe still coming to grips with their renewed relationship.

[teenwitch77]

Oh thank you ;D I'm really glad you liked it.

[miss_andromache]

Awesome job, seriously.

[teenwitch77]

Oh thanks!

[havemy_heart]

This is lovely :-) Excellent job describing their emotions, and how it's awkward for them right now. A couple of favorite passages:

She deepened the kiss with something akin to desperation, keenly aware of the low, constant well of longing in her heart making itself known again. She was just starting to understand how much she really needed him in her life. It was frightening, but thrilling at the same time.

I'm glad that Veronica finally realizes and admits to herself how important Logan is to her.

Also,

“Veronica…” His low, husky voice lingered over her name seriously, and she knew he could taste her need. Her sudden urgency to understand what it was about her that made him stay.

Logan needs her as much as she needs him, and I hope she eventually realizes that too.

♥

[teenwitch77]

Thank you! I can only hope we do actually get to see them deal with some of these things when the show comes back. I'm really glad you enjoyed it, especially since I'm still so new to writing for this pairing ;D

[perfect__weapon]

Aw, that was so amazing.
I really enjoyed reading it.

[teenwitch77]

Oh thank you!

[sitebuilderchic]

Amazing, truly amazing. I loved this.

[teenwitch77]

Thanks! I'm really glad you liked it.