Weekly Obbo 240 Picture Prompt

[merentha13]

Title: Discovery
Author: Merentha13
Pros-Lib / Circuit Archive: Yes
Pairing and / or characters: Bodie,Doyle
Rating: everyone
Word count: 685
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Just borrowing the lads, no copyright infringement intended
Note: Continues on from Weekly Obbo 239 "Desire"

Comments

[sw33n3y]

I really like the way you've used the prompt here - the perfect symbol for Doyle's move.

I especially liked this line: 'Morpheus was a mercurial god, and apparently had no use for him tonight'.

Nice work. :D

[merentha13]

Thank you! 'mercurial' is one of my favorite words! I love to find a way to use it and this seemed perfect. Glad you enjoyed this.

[snailbones]

What a great use of the prompt - I'd never have made the Pandora's Box connection in a million years, and you've used it beautifully. Thank you.

[merentha13]

I was thinking a simple treasure chest, at first - but that golden light emanating from the box seem to need something more [That - and my daughters part time job at a "Pandora's Jewelry" store, got the imagination going! *g*]

Thanks for reading and enjoying the story!

[ali15son]

What a beautiful story and I was kept guessing to see what you would use as the prompt ... Thank you for this xx

[merentha13]

So glad you liked it! I have trouble sometimes writing from Bodie's POV (being a Doyle dame, myself *g*) When a Bodie fan compliments one of my attempts at Bodie - I feel like I got it right. Thanks so much!

[ali15son]

Oh you definatley got it 100% right , trust me coming from a Bodie fanatic xx

[macklingirl]

It's great. And I'm looking forward to the end of the serial. I hope the next prompt will give you a good idea. :-)

[merentha13]

Me too! I do have a plan - we'll have to see if the next propmt will fit. Glad your enjoying this. Thanks!