Developing conversations

[xoxo_nat_xx]

Title: Developing Conversations
Author: xoxo_nat_xx
Pairing: Haehyuk
Ratings: PG-13
Warnings: Dub-con
Summary: Anything can happen during college, and two minds belonging to two entirely different people starts to twine around each other, forming a completion at the end.

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[xoxo_nat_xx]

Spot for drawingintheair

[drawingintheair]

fail? do you even know what the word means? because THIS is the complete opposite of fail. I'm buying you a dictionary.

I would honestly quote the whole thing like akihikaru basically did but i won't because it wouldn't fit and it's early for my brain to function properly.

LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!

The flow of the story is perfect. Not a single step is missing in the progression of their relationship and it is detailed in a beautiful way. Why Hyuk falls for Hae is clearly understandable and totally sweet but my fave part of the story is this:

No wonder Eunhyuk bought headphones to block out the noises, not that he couldn’t stand the noise, but he couldn’t stand how his heart was breaking when Donghae is doing some girl outside his room. No wonder Eunhyuk tells him not to be so nice, because he’s just leading the other on, and he doesn’t realize this until, and only until he starts feeling something else other than friendship for the guy in his arms. No wonder Eunhyuk got so angry when he’s being used, because Donghae thinks he

[xoxo_nat_xx]

I was so afraid that Hyuk fell in love too quickly with Hae! And I was trying hard to add in subtle scenes. I'm so glad it paid off well! :D

And the end came after I ate my lunch, which means I kind of cleared my head during lunch? :D Okay now I'm glad I ate my lunch because that sentence kind of came out on itself too, and I was pretty stunned that my fingers actually typed that out.

As for the title, it...just came? I wanted to create this story where there are two different perspectives going on at the same time, changing from hyuk to hae, then hae to hyuk. In a way I thought of it as a conversation, but one that is going on in the mind, and not spoken aloud, so I just wrote "Developing Conversations." At first I wanted to write "Conversations of the mind", but that seems a tad too familiar with my previous yewook fic, so I abandoned it!

I LOVE YOU WHY ARE YOU SO SWEET WITH YOUR COMMENTS AND OMG MEMS? YOU DON'T KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVE YOU RIGHT NOW.

[xoxo_nat_xx]

Spot for eiarim

[eiarim]

Thank you~!!!!bb ILUSM!
that two imperfect lives come together to form a perfect completion.
You know how perfect this is!!!Too perfect for words!!!This is no fail!I see this as perfection:DDDD

[xoxo_nat_xx]

No unni! Thank you! You were the one who thrashed out the ending with me after I lost focus after writing the dub con, and if you haven't suggested that perhaps someone should just initiate the conversation and thrash it all out at a go, I wouldn't have continued, and the fic would have remained very much stagnant. So in a way, this fic is part of your work too! :D

Thank you unni you are too sweet :DDDD

[xoxo_nat_xx]

Spot for fishydotlove

[fishydotlove]

OMGOMG THE ENDING SRSLY WIN AND I HATE YOU FOR SAYING THAT IT'S FAIL>:(

i love All the thing you added last night thank goodness for no blohyuk
the scene where they got together is real sweet and i love it so much!
i went :DDD so big at this --> “Are you sure you aren’t drunk?”

Ahdkdjksjslhdlshdk;hsk

I'd love to quote many of the lines but itouch sucks for commenting ):
GUH, IM SO MEMMING THIS AND PLEASE THIS THING IS WAYYY BETTER THAN MINE THX

im sure hyuk'll love this bb<3

[xoxo_nat_xx]

HAHAHAHA THE BLOHYUK. You have to thank eiarim-unni for that, because the ideas she gave me after I got stuck kind of didn't mix well with the blohyuk, and I was tired and I saw that as the only possible way out, so I abandoned my blohyuk. But that still doesn't allow you to sleep late because I can still threaten you with my blohyuk!

Hae is an asshole and he needs to know that, so Eunhyuk has to ask him if he's drunk to make him feel the full impact :DDDD I'm a very hyuk-biased shipper :D

I LOVE YOU!

[hyukhae4ever]

is hating her office's internet connection!!!

spot for me and Tee!

[hyukhae4ever]

you and Clarissa having a fail-fic contest or something?
why you guys said that your fic is fail when it's not *pout*

this is just lovely... i can feel the frustration that Eunhyuk was having...

okay... i really wish that i can give you super long comment on this, but my brain's dead =_=

anyway, as I said before, this is NOT fail!

[xoxo_nat_xx]

I was trying to show her that her fic isn't fail, which it isn't right!! RIGHT! Yeah, so scold her for saying that her fic is fail hahaha.

Hahaha oh wells you don't have to give me a super long comment, just comment and I will feel very very touched already! :D Because it means that you read and enjoyed it, so all's fine :D

Yeah Hyuk's frustrated, anyone wants to write me a Hyukhae fic where the fic can help neutralise the amount of frustration Hyuk felt in this fic? :D

[dbsj0001]

awww~ sweet!
i wonder who's that guy from the past that broke hae's heart?
oh well,my eunhae os happily living together! ;D

"that two imperfect lives come together to form a perfect completion."-love this line sooo MUCH!!

[xoxo_nat_xx]

Hmm...I didn't have a specific guy in my head when I wrote his part out, so you can treat it as whoever you want! Preferably an older figure, because he's one who helps Donghae to grow, in a sense, though DOnghae was rather hurt by the process.

Thank you! I love that line too :DD