Silent Maze of Hide and Seek- Chapter 2

Jan 21, 2011 21:25


Title: Silent Maze of Hide and Seek
Author: takelo14
Pairing: Yunjae
Length: (2/8)
Genre: Horror, Angst, possible death
Rating: PG 13
Warning: (in later chapters) Violence, Gore, Sexual Content
Summary: Yunho is in a living nightmare. Will he be able to get out?...

A/N: made from Yunho's blood, sweat, and tears.

Previous: Prologue Chapter 1

Read more... )

fic: silent maze of hide and seek, genre: violence, pairing: yunjae, genre: horror, genre: angst

Leave a comment

Comments 21

iluv_wonjaemin January 22 2011, 02:40:57 UTC
I love this story <3 so far it's so well-written~ i can even feel yunho's thought xD
em,,the doll has something to do with jaejoong i think! maybe it's kind of voodoo doll~
xD
when yunho hurt the doll,jaejoong will get hurt too,is it rite? xD
update soon please~~

Reply

takelo14 January 22 2011, 03:12:21 UTC
im glad you like it ^^ i dont know aabout well written tho D: i still have a lot to work on.
:) i'll try to update next weekend, probably not any sooner
thanks for reading bb <3

Reply


ajuway January 22 2011, 03:28:54 UTC
oh.. oh.. oh.. a quiz!!
i'm sure i will failed to answer that..
can you give a hint.. no? okay...

let me guess.. (this is random)
1. jaejoong
2. the creepy guy know about jaejoong's past.. er.. but how did he do that with the doll.. he gotta teach me that!!
3. you know i love cliffhanger.. (take the knife from the doll and run after you..)

p.s--> i wanna kill you for making yunho hurt that bad.. oh, heart can't calm down now.. What to do??!!!

Reply

takelo14 January 22 2011, 03:39:52 UTC
interesting theories ^^
sorry! cant say if you got any of them right -_-" (i gotta be a little secretive, dont i?)

and oh, im so sorry about yunho. But lol, welcome to my horror stories! pain and violence is everywhere!
thanks for reading and commenting bb <3

Reply


ouji January 22 2011, 05:49:34 UTC
oh damn that doll sure knows how to kick yunho's ass xD I love the blood scene very much *___* It was truly thrilling and i felt ever stab the doll shoved at him! ^___^ I dont' mind if you took it out on yunjae because you're channeling your energy to something you will like xD

OH yes!! those are the three major reaspms i wanted to interrogate you for!! :D now fess up and come clean *___* /gets hit

Also i'm very grateful that you have started writing that other fic of your's :'D so much dedication that i wished i had some *drops dead* x___x

Reply

takelo14 January 22 2011, 06:11:37 UTC
really? Thanks :) and yes, that is one kick-ass doll ^^
well, about the memory thing... The whole story won't be crystal clear until the very end (sorry!) but the doll thing will come up next chapter and the cliff hangers... Yes, the cliff hangers will almost ALWAYS be there T_T
I don't think anyone would like me if I just told everyone everything >///<
Lol and I've also already decided how this fic is going to end ^^ *cheers* but I'm sure plenty if people will be confused!
thanks for commenting bb <3 (nice to see u around here all the time ^^)

Reply

ouji January 22 2011, 06:36:42 UTC
you're always welcome^^

I really don't mind waiting ;D I mean I'm busy lately so i won't have time to think that i'm waiting ^^ Then when you do update i'll just think 'wow she's fast' kind of thing ;) so no worries to you!<3

Cliffies are a pain but i think the places you stop are reasonable :) of course a story won't be a story anymore if you reveal it xD it's part of horror too! you can't tell them ANYTHING!! lol so i think you're doing a great job on the theme so far^^

I bet i'll be one of them confused when you post up the ending! xD at least you have that planned out because then you won't really have much of a writer's block^^

haha of course i'm around! i'm always around within a few hours lol so you can't miss me when i'm stalking updated fics^^

Reply

takelo14 January 23 2011, 05:22:40 UTC
For this fic and the other one I'm gonna start, I won't have much trouble writing since it's horror/ violence.but I have trouble with romance because even though I love reading them, I get bored when I write them. So I think I'm gonna stick to horror and violence with the occasional comedy and smut ^^

And thanks for reading and commenting bb <3

Reply


kattan69 January 22 2011, 17:30:18 UTC
I dread to think that the doll represent Jae...meaning Jae is hurt as well....*shudders*.

Reply

takelo14 January 22 2011, 18:41:34 UTC
Uhhh... No comment O_O
You guys have me all figured out don't u
lol thanks for reading bb <3

Reply


(The comment has been removed)

takelo14 January 23 2011, 01:03:45 UTC
gah >.< now i feel bad for writing something so morbid! Im sorry!

and thanks for reading bb <3

Reply


Leave a comment

Up