Comments | taffee_mandie: Benjamin Linus (Part 3/?)

taffee_mandie

Benjamin Linus (Part 3/?)

Nov 05, 2006 22:29

I really need to start including some other others so I can start at fanfic100 :-/ Whatever. This part of the fic was so fun to right because I love that Benry's memorized the Hippocratic Oath and is using it against Juliet. It's angsty OTP love, my friends!

Title: Benjamin Linus
Characters: Kate, Sawyer, Jack, but mostly Ben and Juliet
Word Count: 893
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ben linus, lost, fan fiction

Comments 7

sylphiel November 6 2006, 03:47:10 UTC

"...But then again, there is 'To avoid sexual relationships or other inappropriate entanglements with patients and families', I'm sure you've heard that."
"Ben."
"We didn't do so great on that one, huh?" Ben smirked.

Made of awesome. XD

taffee_mandie November 6 2006, 04:04:20 UTC

The ship itself is made of awesome. *nods*

Thanks, though. I loved that line...I had my cocky fangirl smile on as I wrote it.

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taffee_mandie November 6 2006, 12:01:48 UTC

That's true, isn't it? Thanks. :-) I'm glad you liked this part.

noblealice November 6 2006, 17:21:29 UTC

Benjamin Linus had shot his mother.

You gave me CHILLS!

Dude, I love your Hurley and Charlie, with the sarcasm and air quotes! *gives you some island fruit*

I love Ben talking to Juliet. It's so creepy and commanding.

taffee_mandie November 6 2006, 20:59:15 UTC

*happy* I'm so glad that Charlie and Hurley seemed real enough...especially because I'm gonna include them in the next part a lot. And that Ben still seemed creepy enough. (I was afraid I might lose the whole 'creepy' aspect in this part...)

ultimateairn November 6 2006, 21:08:15 UTC

i was going to post saying that this didn't make sense...until i realized i was reading part three.
*facepalm*
*scurries to read part 1&2*
XD

taffee_mandie November 6 2006, 21:14:22 UTC

LMFAO I've done that numerous times.

Make sure to tell me what you think. :-) Feedback inspires.