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nisakomi July 18 2012, 17:33:48 UTC
OH MY GOD AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

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sweetshisus July 18 2012, 18:40:57 UTC
I swtg I keep thinking your dp is sehun in drag lawd

♥ ♥

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sweetshisus July 18 2012, 18:41:15 UTC
omg ty~ for reading & commenting! pls rec it to ppl if you can ♥

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leakages July 18 2012, 19:14:26 UTC
ANGRY SEX THAT ISN'T ACTUALLY QUITE ANGRY. YES.

but i really, really liked their characterizations and relationship here ; ~ ; they are both far from perfect despite what it may look like from their swimming skills alone and god they are just made for each other made to fuck the brains out of each other and their entire lives just felt like a slow and steady build up to an explosive moment that i was afraid at first wouldn't be quite as explosive as i would've wanted but you managed to do just that (make them explode. in more ways than one haaaaaah ok i'll stop).

and honestly, The way you fucked me just now? Luhan let out a wry laugh. It was fucking subpar.

fave line is fave.

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sweetshisus July 18 2012, 19:19:50 UTC
haha yep that was what I was going for!

;~; omg ty for this comment. you're so very sweet ♥ pls rec if you can~

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hennu15 July 18 2012, 19:35:46 UTC
asdfgh OMFG I LOVE THIS omg ♥ i cant the feels, this was like perfect xD Angry sex and then the lovely ending awwww ♥♥

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sweetshisus July 18 2012, 21:34:50 UTC
haha thank you~ for reading & for commenting! pls rec~ ♥

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yixing July 19 2012, 11:58:16 UTC
uhmmm UHMMMM

i think i enjoyed this too much, ugh /fans self

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sweetshisus July 19 2012, 14:40:44 UTC
o did you mary~

:3 ty bbcakes ♥

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