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[sweetshisus]

fandom: exo-m
pairing: yixing/luhan
rating: nc-17 for sex n__n
prompt: "yixing and luhan are told it's the last day on earth, that the sun is going to explode so they spend the day with eachother and then have sex as the world is crumbling u________u"
for: yixing
author's note: the chinese translates to the last line of each section n____n

Comments

[nisakomi]

SPOT

[nisakomi]

OH MY GOD I AM JUST DYING IN A PUDDLE HERE

the sense of need and urgency and desperation was absolutely electrifying. the sex was incredible and yixing's raw emotions are so powerfully done.

thank you so so much for writing and sharing this, wow.

[sweetshisus]

omg sobs ;_________; tyvm for your enthusiasm and support. I'm glad that the emotions were clear and that you enjoyed it! I was really worried bc I've never written exo or even read exo fic enough to know what the canon personalities of the members are in fandom but ty omg sobs n___n ♥

[nisakomi]

tbh i prefer things that way, i find when fanon becomes read and used that fic becomes boring and contrite

that being said, i think you really captured them well!

[cut_thestring]

um.

this is glorious. that whole sense of urgency running throughout the fic, luhan liking yixing just as much the other does because poor yixing easy to write into one-sided relationships with luhan idek why, how everything between them changes (and kind of doesn't, at the same time?) in the last 24 hours.

oh, there i go without capitalisation again. anyway, i really liked this. ♥

[sweetshisus]

omg tyvm ;; I've discovered a knack for writing unrequited love but luhan falling for yixing was sort of inevitable given the prompt. and yesss, that's exactly the effect I was going for: nothing really changed, but they were just more honest with each other given the time constraint.

haha, no worries, and thank you for commenting! please recommend it to people if you can :) ♥

[emberberry]

Oh my god. This was just so beautiful. I agree with the other comments, that there was a perfectly portrayed sense of urgency in this; also the need to be together being so present. it feels like they have so much they want to say to each other but they barely have enough time to say everything. I don't even know what I'm saying, haha, but ignore my incoherency. this was so well-written. thank you for sharing! ♥

[sweetshisus]

aww, tyvm for commenting n___n! haha, I completely understood your comment, and I'm glad you enjoyed it! please recommend it to people if you can :) ♥

[hennu15]

;A; I love this, I really do! So sad but beautiful and I'm so glad that Luhan finally told him even though the world's gonna end ;__; memming!

[sweetshisus]

aww tyvm for commenting! please rec it to people if you can :) ♥

[yixing]

CRIES AT YOU. THE EMOTIONS COURSING THROUGH ME RN, UGHHHHH, ROLLS ON YOU.

but really, kris this is exactly what i wanted, exactly how i pictured it. i know my prompt wasn't even detailed or impassioned or anything---but i've been wanting someone to write this for ages and i'm so glad you were the one to write it ♥

i loved it, the desperation--the urgency--THE EVERYTHING.

cries. ilu.

[sweetshisus]

yes, pls roll on me, I welcome your rolling /holds open arms

omg I'm blushing ;; whenever I'm able to write what people prompt, I'm always so happy bc sometimes my mind takes control and just goes ham on the prompt and it often ends up being different than what people initially expected. so sobs ;; yay I'm glad you liked it! and no, sometimes the less details ones are the best, because it's all about what the writer interprets and I'm glad our interpretations matched up n____n

omg ilu2 ♥ ♥ you're kawaiiiiiiiiii