Comments | sunev789: [FIC] F.H.B. {HoMin, NC-17}

sunev789

[FIC] F.H.B. {HoMin, NC-17}

Jan 04, 2009 03:30

{FUCK. HOT. BAD.}
HoMin, NC-17
No idea what category...T_T But smuttish.

( Fighting against the haze but your lungs are losing and no oxygen seems to be left in the world. )

drabble, written, gods...rising from where?, hominotp

Comments 21

mrs_min_ai January 4 2009, 10:04:52 UTC

O____________O

AJSDF;KAJSDFH;ASJKDFH;ASKJDFH;SDJF -dies-
omg bb this was soooooooo freaking sexy! x] i loved, loved, loved how you described everything. I'm just maddly in love with this line right here...

Like Heaven’s liquor and Hell’s bubblegum, his lips taste like nothing you’ll ever taste again.

AKSJD;ASJD;ASDJ;ASDJA guhh... just goregeous. ;-;♥ If I could marry it... I would, though it'd be a litte awkward. xD

*hugs you tight and saves to mems* ilu~ :D♥

mrs_min_ai January 4 2009, 10:06:05 UTC

*Or, if you wish this to be rated PG, change to: he’s under your sky. XD

LMAOOOOOOO!!!! Good one!!! XD XD XD

sunev789 January 4 2009, 18:49:40 UTC

OMFG~
You're comment, like, made me explode in tiny little bits of happiness!
I love that line atoo! I was so proud of it when I wrote it. XD
Ooh, is that a marriage proposal? 8D
You memmmed this little thing? DIES
♥ ♥ ilumoar. ;_;
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dongbangboys January 4 2009, 10:23:18 UTC

My icon should explain everything.
It's been explaining a lot of things these days..

<3

sunev789 January 4 2009, 18:51:24 UTC

It put a huge freakin' smile on my face...
*wishes to join some sort of Chang Wang club now*
Thanks for reading! 8D ♥
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amazonstorm January 4 2009, 11:39:29 UTC

All I have to say is this:

WOW.

sunev789 January 4 2009, 18:52:25 UTC

Keke~ *blushes* :3
Thanks, bbs! I'm glad you liked it! ♥
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sunev789 January 4 2009, 18:56:48 UTC

UWAH, HUGE FACE. 8D
I needed to stop somewhere or else I'd end up keeping it & not finishing it. D:
Thanks, bbs~ ♥
*still needs to catch up on your JaeSuChun fic* ;_;
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starof_earendil January 4 2009, 18:23:52 UTC

I love your figurative (Is figurative right? I've been out of English class for a year) writing, like the "Heaven's liquor and Hell's bubblegum", it's so beautiful. Write more!

sunev789 January 4 2009, 18:59:13 UTC

(I dunno, I have English next semester. D:)
Haha, 'tis my favorite line. ♥
I'll try! OK, wait, to this fic or just in general?
Thanks for reading, bbs~ ♥ 8D
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starof_earendil January 4 2009, 19:00:09 UTC

More as in both fic and in general :D.