RYODA FIC: Nothing (one-shot)

[sugarbloodlolli]

Author: sugarbloodlolli
Title: Nothing
Pairing: RYODA 
Genre: Angst/Bittersweet
Rating: PG
Author's Note: A request by sweetspicyhot for  her donation. This charity drive is organized  by help_pilipinas . Sorry for any grammatical or spelling errors. I wrote this at 3 in the morning :) enjoy~! Shoutout to my muse, messyboo . Sorry babe <3 Love ya!

I leaned my head on his shoulder, body covered in sweat

Comments

[sugarbloodlolli]

spot for sweetspicyhot :)

[sweetspicyhot]

Thanks so much for writing my request! I love it. it is great to read some good angst. I love the complexity of their emotions. Nothing is simple with Ryoda but that is what makes them great. I love especially how you wrote Tat-chan and I love the bit of hope at the end--that Tat-chan will keep trying, They are both stubborn ne, but hopefully they will also be too stubborn to fall out of love with each other. They so obviously love and desire one another, hopefully they will be able to overcome the boundaries they have set to protect themselves. i agree with deshisoraba-- a sequel would be great--but no pressure. Thanks again, it's a great fic.

Hugs and hearts :D:D:D<3<3<3

[sugarbloodlolli]

:D I'm so glad that you like it <3
Yes, they are both stubborn to the core but they still love each other no matter what.
Since Ryo was the one who got dumped, it did hurt his pride and feelings. Which is why he is setting these boundaries because he doesn't want to get hurt again.

As for Tatchan, he doesn't set any boundaries even though he was badly hurt as well. This is because he did not feel 'abandoned' like Ryo did. I could say he is more optimistic and less broody than Ryo. Tatchan has to prove himself to Ryo that he won't leave Ryo again, which is going to be hard. sigh~

I will most likely write a sequel after I update the rest of my fics :) thanks for reading <3

[deshisoraba]

Loved it!
Those complicated feelings I am very familiar with them after i've been into something so similar to what you've described here. And, seriously, it stroked me.
I've never read a fic like this before. I think it needs a sequel.

[sugarbloodlolli]

Hi dear! Thanks for reading <3
I was trying to bring out conflicting feelings in Tatchan.
ah yes~ I feel there's a need to write a sequel and it will be from Ryo's POV :)

[symphonic_rain]

omg so sad, but so good! It really is bitter sweet <3 I miss your fics! Thanks for this one! It was really good ^.^

[sugarbloodlolli]

:D thanks for reading <3
I really appreciate it alot. *hugs*
I will try to write more since I'm on a holiday :)

[granity20]

what the hell ryo?!?
you keep on telling tat-chan that he shouldn't be sad???
who wouldn't be sad if he was in the same situation as ueda??
even i would be very sad too. fuming mad also!!!!
i really feel like beating ryo in here!

[sugarbloodlolli]

^^; hehe *pull Granny away from Ryo*
Ryoda's situation is complicated ne?
Ryo is still bitter and confuse with his feelings.
That's why he kept sticking it into Ueda with "you're the one who ended it." and say things that he know will hurt Ueda. Despite getting hurt, deep down Ryo doesn't want his Hime to feel sad.

[granity20]

well, i don't like the way he copes up with his sadness and depression!!!!
your hime is breaking in to pieces and what you are doing isn't really helpful you freakin' midget!!!

deary, don't tell your gramps that i almost went into rampage....
he'll definitely went on a rampage too if he knew what i almost did. he's more on the "doing what is appropriate" behavior and what i did wasn't appropriate!^^

[sugarbloodlolli]

Haha! My lips are sealed :X won't tell grandpa about it.

I think in the sequel, I will revealed how Hime broke up with Ryo and
why Ryo is still very hurt about it. I hope it will better explain Ryo's feelings
even though he seems like an idiot here :)

In any case, don't hate these lovebirds <3 hehe

[sanox]

*takes a machine gun*
*Points at you two*

[sugarbloodlolli]

=___= *squirt your with water gun*
behave yourself *pinch your cheeks*