Nov 15, 2017 17:13
place: academie la tour,
stories: strangetown here we come,
place: strangetown,
character: sugar tits,
character: broke,
character: smith,
character: worthington,
character: subject,
character: curious,
place: la fiesta tech,
character: grunt
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Will be back to comment when I've read it and digested it!
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OK, I think I'm done freaking out...
This chapter was hilarious! And very well written, by-the-way. I really like Tank's development throughout this story and how he is noticing that he's become more comfortable with Francis and Beau.
And Jenny, poor Jenny.
And Ripp and Ophelia. They are hilarious. I love that Johnny is still apart of their relationship even though he's gone away.
OK, I'll go back to freaking out now.
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UPDATE!!
I'm not sure I can get a coherent comment out, but WOW! YAY! So great to hear from everyone again!
I loved Jenny getting more interested in her own sexuality via Sex Chat With Cat.
"And enough with the euphemisms! Let's not call it woohoo and blur it out with pixels." <-- best line ever
Ripp and Ophelia's sexytimes were, on the one hand, sexy, and on the other hand, incredibly poignant. Especially with "what would Johnny do if he were here." *sniff* Johnny needs to COME HOME. Like NOW.
Hopefully around the same time that Tank figures out how he's going to stop an impending genocide.
... Has he considered alerting the media?
Also - I am THRILLED that Tank wants to STOP the impending genocide. It shows a HUGE amount of character growth from when he started. YAY!
I wish I had something coherent to say. But your update MADE MY DAY. My week. My month. Maybe even my year!
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This was such an awesome chapter! You are such a great writer, and the part about Ripp and Ophelia still having Johnny in their life somehow was such a sweet thing.
I wish I could give you a better comment, but I'm emotionally spent from reading this, it was so well worth the wait!
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