Yeah, there's a lot going on here, isn't there? I've been working my way up to this for a while now. Things will ease off a little for while after this. It'll be a nice change of pace.
Thank you. :) I'm looking forward to writing something a little lighter after this, since the last three chapters have been very heavy on the drama. Not to say that it will all be light and funny, but the pendulum will swing back in that direction quite a bit. Funny. I need more funny.
I can't comment too much on where Johnny's going to end up, but (I like to I think) I've still got a couple of interesting things up my sleeve.
Haha! Yeah, the Mr. Humble thing? I'm not sure if I'll ever actually do that, but I like that it's there as an in-universe option to do a spinoff or something similar. And it's fun to hint at the fact that "it's all just a game..."
Perfect chapter, just perfect. All the characters linking together, their lives all intertwined. Loved the picture of Johnny gazing wistfully out of the spaceship window. You couldn't capture a more fitting emotion and moment. Phi being pregnant! I suspected that after re-reading the previous chapter - several times. I am so glad that everything is wrapping up quite nicely but there's still room for more. I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this story from day one. Being carried along with all the characters.
Out of curiosity (and I hope this isn't too personal), do you intend to keep writing? Or will you be taking a break for your expanding family? I can understand that time is precious and fleeting, but you have an innate knack of bringing characters to life. making them well rounded - flaws and all.
Pardon my ramblings. Just awed by your storytelling.
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Thanks for reading! :)
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And it seems you left some things open to move on to 'another world' (perhaps TS3 or 4, I guess?) interesting!
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I can't comment too much on where Johnny's going to end up, but (I like to I think) I've still got a couple of interesting things up my sleeve.
Haha! Yeah, the Mr. Humble thing? I'm not sure if I'll ever actually do that, but I like that it's there as an in-universe option to do a spinoff or something similar. And it's fun to hint at the fact that "it's all just a game..."
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I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this story from day one. Being carried along with all the characters.
Out of curiosity (and I hope this isn't too personal), do you intend to keep writing? Or will you be taking a break for your expanding family? I can understand that time is precious and fleeting, but you have an innate knack of bringing characters to life. making them well rounded - flaws and all.
Pardon my ramblings. Just awed by your storytelling.
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