Comments | strange_tomato: Strangetown, Here We Come: Chapter Thirty-Eight

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Strangetown, Here We Come: Chapter Thirty-Eight - part two

Oct 29, 2014 17:16

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stories: strangetown here we come, place: strangetown, character: zimmerman, character: humble, character: smith, character: nigmos, character: rai, character: subject, place: la fiesta tech, character: grunt

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anonymous October 29 2014, 20:30:52 UTC

You should warn for this many liable-to-cause-major-feelings in a chapter.

I LOVE this story anonymous October 29 2014, 20:57:06 UTC

I really do! I can sort of see how you could end it here but I'm glad that there is more coming. I've really enjoyed Ripp and Tank's character arcs so far and I look forward to how they develop after this.

Re: I LOVE this story strange_tomato October 30 2014, 17:47:53 UTC

Thank you. :) I've really enjoyed working with those characters, and I'm glad you think I've done them justice. I think the way they might develop from this point onward has the potential to be very interesting.

I think it would make for a fairly unsatisfying ending, but an ending nonetheless. There would be a lot left to wonder about, but at least this arc of the story would get resolved in some sense. If I was going to leave it there, I'd likely have added something else to at least hint at some of the directions I was planning to take it in.

But I'm going to continue, so I no longer need to worry about that. :)

Re: I LOVE this story anonymous November 1 2014, 01:27:31 UTC

DA: I'd say this would be where a multi-book arc would end, if you were writing it a novel series.

cameoflage October 29 2014, 21:03:39 UTC

Heh heh. Tank grunted.

strange_tomato October 30 2014, 17:32:51 UTC

Heeheeee. How long do you think I've been waiting to use that line somewhere?

meetme2theriver October 30 2014, 18:11:55 UTC

I forgot to comment on that before. But I noticed. And grinned.

strange_tomato October 30 2014, 18:20:44 UTC

I like it when other people notice those little details that I thought were funny when I was writing them. It makes me feel less like it's me just sitting here cracking up at my own jokes. :P

And who doesn't like puns, right?

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iliveforsims2 October 29 2014, 21:12:51 UTC

Omg! This was amazing! I totally predicted the whole Ophelia thing! I really hope this is not the end as I would continue to read this story for the rest of my life. This by far, is the best Sims story I have ever found and nothing has even come close to this! Strange_tomato, you have a wonderful knack for making this story seem so real! I really hope you continue to post more as I would love to finish it!

strange_tomato October 30 2014, 17:29:36 UTC

Well, that's good, because at the rate I'm going I'll probably be writing it for the rest of my life! :P Haha! Well, not really, but it will probably continue on for some time, I think.

When you mentioned recently that you'd been reading through the story again and picked up on some hints, I thought that might be what you were referring to. ;)

Ah, thank you. :) That means a lot to me. Thank you for sticking with it over the years.

cindyanne1 October 29 2014, 22:04:59 UTC

I love this so much! All the family stories and background is all coming together and it's just perfect.

strange_tomato October 30 2014, 15:41:36 UTC

Thanks, Cindy! :) I'm glad you think so. I love how there are so many little connections like that built into Strangetown from the start. It gives you a lot to work with in a story, and many directions you could take it in. Lots of good material to work with there.