164 ficlet - Not Much Left

Apr 06, 2010 17:17

Title: Not Much Left
Author: deird1
Rating: G
Word Count: 132
Prompt: 164 (Robin Wood)
Character: Robin

what she was )

164, ficlet, g, btvs, deird1, robin

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riccadonna April 6 2010, 11:03:07 UTC
What a shock to have one's childhood memories betrayed!
Beautiful.

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deird1 April 6 2010, 21:03:00 UTC
Thanks!

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angelus2hot April 6 2010, 13:23:37 UTC
Poor Robin..it kind of makes you wonder if a slayer really should have kids, knowing that her life expectancy isn't all that long..

Well written as always!

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deird1 April 6 2010, 21:26:30 UTC
Thanks!

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brutti_ma_buoni April 6 2010, 15:36:48 UTC
Oooh, that hurts. Glad you got the inspiration though.

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deird1 April 6 2010, 22:40:55 UTC
Glad you liked it!

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rebcake April 6 2010, 18:11:37 UTC
Uh oh. The block tower turned into Jenga, with an essential piece removed.

Childhood associations are so interesting from the outside. I'm guessing there was a little bit of nephew in there! ;-) Well done.

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deird1 April 6 2010, 22:41:16 UTC
Thanks!

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brunettepet April 6 2010, 22:19:46 UTC
I love how this starts as a warm remembrance of his mother and then turns dark. Spike putting on that coat would burn.

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deird1 April 6 2010, 22:41:39 UTC
Glad you like it!

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