049 - ficlet - Haiku

[spankulert]

Title: Much fanku about death
Author: Maharet83
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 105
Prompt: 49 - Haiku
Characters: Jonathan, Tara, Angelus, Joyce, Anya, Buffy, Willow, Warren
AN: Haikus on the subject of death on BtVS

Comments

[deird1]

Clever.

I loved Buffy's death described as a "leap to freedom", the nice quoting of "just skip it?", and Jonathan and Anya's (just in general).

[spankulert]

Thanks! It was 'just skip it' that set off that entire haiku actually :)

[mary5958]

These are really well done - and every single one of them puts pictures in my mind. Thank you for sharing.

[spankulert]

Glad you like :)

[redrikki]

Very nice set with some really great turns of phrase. Hust one question, what is syllable pattern for Haikus?

[spankulert]

5 - 7 - 5 :)

[dreamincolor]

Wow. These were all really nice, the Tara and Joyce ones in particular tugged at my heart strings. Some of those lines were so perfect, like "Willow bored now" and the "(for now)."

[spankulert]

Awww thanks! Tugging is good :)

[lesbianbutch04]

very well done... i love;

Rifts tear through the heavens
arms spread wide, leap to freedom
death is my gift (for now)

[spankulert]

Thanks. It's one of my faves too :)