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Fic: The Loose Ends Will Make Knots... (8/10)

Apr 15, 2013 20:45

Title: The Loose Ends Will Make Knots.
Author: Starvinbohemian.
Rating: NC-17.
Pairings: Sonny/Brian, Sonny/Will.
Summary: “You look into his blue eyes, still hazy with want for you, and you realize you have your answer. Not all escapes are destinations.”

( Chapter 8 )

sonny/will, days of our lives, my fic, sonny/brian

Comments 4

I have that sick feelings that Brian is gonna lose even in a fanfic :( anonymous April 18 2013, 01:01:32 UTC

I honesly skip all the talk about Will and Wish Sonny just forget the past and focus on the present or maybe the future (my wishful thinking lol) But the fanfic is so good and so beautifully written, i like how both fanbases can be please with this. For a moment there i thought Sonny wasnt gonna get a lil jelly i was like "come on" but you didnt dissapointed. when will next chapter be out?

Re: I have that sick feelings that Brian is gonna lose even in a fanfic :( starvinbohemian April 24 2013, 16:32:24 UTC

It's nice to know that there are some Brison shippers reading, too! I am doing my best to keep the ships balanced.

Next chapter will be out soon! Thanks for reading!

Thanks for writing this... anonymous April 28 2013, 13:54:55 UTC

... I really don't know how you are going to finish this story in 2 chapters at all, so I seriously suspect the ending might be a bit open-ended. I like the way that you can see Sonny kind of falling in love with Brian as well to balance the hurt and love offered by Will. I thought it was interesting that in the Will path they started as friends and the physical relationship grew out of the friendship, but the relationship with Brian seems to be starting with the sex first and the intimacy growing out of that. My favourite bit of this chapter is how Sonny realises that he has been moving in with Brian and crowding him and Brian is all, "no you're not". There was always that expectation that Sonny (and the audience) were lead to believe that after they had sex Brian would eventually lose interest, but it never happened, and I have liked getting the glimpse of Brian's seemingly genuine feelings for Sonny as Sonny starts to become aware of them. I also like the inversion that all Sonny and Will's friends want them to come together (like ( ... )

Re: Thanks for writing this... starvinbohemian May 1 2013, 06:00:55 UTC

Those last two chapters are definitely going to be packed tight lol.

"I like the way that you can see Sonny kind of falling in love with Brian as well to balance the hurt and love offered by Will."

Yes, yes, yes. <3

Thank you so much for reading!